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Fatal Instinct (1993)

by David O'Malley.
Shooting draft.

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FOR EDUCATIONAL PURPOSES ONLY


FADE IN ON:

EXT. SANTA MONICA PIER - NIGHT

The sultry dampness of a blistering summer hangs in the night 
air. People stroll the boardwalk looking for a cool breeze. 
The soft rhythms of a jazz concert float from the band shell.

CLOSE SHOT - A PAIR OF SEXY HIGH HEELS

and a woman's shapely legs, walking along the wooden pier. 

OPENING TITLES & CREDITS OVER.

After several steps, a discarded piece of gum sticks to one 
of her shoes, stretching out stickily. Two steps later, a 
piece of paper sticks to the gum, flopping awkwardly with 
each step.

The MOVING CAMERA PANS UP her gorgeous legs and sensuous 
body. She wears a loose summer dress that floats like gossamer 
around her soft curves. Her hair is long and blond.

			NED (V.O.)
	To some guys, women are like a cheap 
	puzzle... with pieces that just don't 
	fit. They think the soul of a woman 
	is darker than a back alley... more 
	tangled than a telephone cord... and 
	colder than a Klondike Bar in Canada. 
	But those guys don't even have a 
	clue.

She stops at the railing. We see an incredibly beautiful 
face and cool, alluring eyes. This is LOLA CAIN. The term 
"femme fatale" was coined for her. She's on display... and 
knows it.

			NED (V.O.)
	When you know women the way I do, 
	you understand exactly what what 
	makes them tick... what makes them 
	hum... what makes them jiggle up and 
	down when they walk. And it's not 
	the kind of thing you can learn from 
	a correspondence course.

The CAMERA MOVES with her as she walks on, passing TWO MEN 
whose eyes are glued to her. We HOLD ON THEM.

One is NED RAVINE, in his thirties, stalwart, handsome, hair 
trimmed neatly, but with a feel of loose ends about him... 
coat slung over his shoulder, sleeves rolled up, the sweat 
dampening his shirt. He's a cop. A plain clothes detective 
who's been around the block a few times and still gets lost.

Next to him is ARCH, his partner. Older, if not in years, at 
least in mileage. Dependable, solid, with no great aspirations 
except to reach the end of a shift intact. He's eating Nachos 
from a cardboard container, licking the cheese off his 
fingers.

The CAMERA PUSHES IN to NED. His eyes are fixed on Lola.

ANGLE - LOLA - NED'S POV

She walks to the other side of the pier... as more paper 
sticks to the gum on her shoe. She stands at the railing.

			NED (V.O.)
	There are two kinds of women in this 
	world... and I've known 'em both.

ANGLE - ARCH

Arch heaves an exasperated sigh and looks toward Ned. The 
CAMERA PULLS BACK to INCLUDE NED. It isn't "voice-over" 
narration at all. Ned is actually talking out loud.

			NED (V.O.)
	One will take you for a fast ride on 
	a bumpy road with no seat belt. But 
	the other kind...

			ARCH
		(interrupts)
	Jeez... knock off the chatter, will 
	ya.

			NED
	Just trying to keep you awake, Arch.

			ARCH
	I'm awake! Where do you come up with 
	all that crap about women?

			NED
	It's true. Women are very complex, 
	but if you know how to read 'em... 
	they're an open book. You can always 
	tell the rotten apples from the 
	peaches.

			ARCH
	Are you kiddin'?

			NED
	I'd stake my career on it. Anybody 
	ever proves me wrong, I'll throw 
	away my badge.

			ARCH
	Aayyhh... women are trouble...

			NED
	I used to believe that too. Until I 
	married Lana. Now, she... is a peach.

			ARCH
	Yeah, well you're a lucky stiff, 
	pal. Ya hold down two jobs. Got a 
	beautiful wife waitin' for ya at 
	home. Everything a guy could ever 
	want, including NO kids.

			NED
	I'd love to have kids.

			ARCH
	What?! Rug-rats? Give me a break!
		(looks around)
	Jeez, I hate stakeouts. What makes 
	you think Milo's gonna show up here?

			NED
	Logic. He knocked off all those banks. 
	He's got cash. He's gonna want to 
	spend it. This is one of the few 
	places that still takes cash. Sooner 
	or later... he's gotta turn up.

			ARCH
	And how we s'posed to recognize this 
	scumbag?

			NED
	The "Support Hose Bandit"? When you 
	see him... you'll know him.

In the b.g., MILO CRUMLEY, the "Support Hose Bandit", ambles 
by casually, unnoticed, sucking on a cherry Snow-Cone through 
the panty-hose pulled down over his head.

			ARCH
	These are the best damn Nachos in 
	North America. Maybe the world!

He pops the last chip in his mouth, licks his fingers and 
turns the container over.

			ARCH
	I'm empty. I'm gonna get a refill. 
	You want some?

Ned shakes his head. Arch heads off to the Nacho stand. Ned 
steps over to the railing... gazes out at the ocean.

A SAXOPHONE begins to wail a scorching, romantic melody... a 
recurrent tune that will come to be known as LOLA'S THEME.

A beat later... Lola moves to Ned's side at the railing. He 
tries to ignore her presence, peering into the darkness. 
Lola digs in her purse for a pack of cigarettes.

			LOLA
	Got a light?

			NED
	Sure.

Ned pulls out a small flashlight, shines it in her purse. 
She pulls a cigarette out of the pack, puts it to her lips... 
her eyes on Ned, sizing him up.

			LOLA
	How about a match?

			NED
	No thanks. I have plenty.

He pulls out a handful of matchbooks, shows her, then stuffs 
them back in his pocket.

He turns and walks along the pier. She falls into step beside 
him, lighting her own cigarette. A saxophone player named 
DIZZY follows behind them, continuing to play. He's the actual 
source of the romantic THEME MUSIC we've been hearing.

			LOLA
	You really are incredibly stupid, 
	aren't you? I like that in a man.

			NED
	I'd be insulted, but I know you're 
	serious.

			LOLA
	You sound so sure of yourself.

			NED
	I'm not as dumb as I look.

			LOLA
	Let me buy you a drink, Mr. uh...

			NED
	Ravine. Ned Ravine. And you are...?

			LOLA
	Thirsty. What about that drink?

			NED
	I'm on duty.

			LOLA
	Brain surgeon?

			NED
	Cop.

			LOLA
	Oooo... and I bet you have a big 
	gun.

			NED
	You lose.

Lola looks toward a nearby hot dog vendor.

			LOLA
	If I can't buy you a drink...
		(nods toward vendor)
	...let me buy you one of those.

			NED
	Who can say no to a weiner?

			LOLA
	Not me.

Lola turns to the hot dog VENDOR, raising two fingers.

			LOLA
	Two dogs. Hot.

She takes them... hands one to Ned. He picks up the plastic 
mustard container to put mustard on her hot dog first.

			NED
	You come here often?

			LOLA
	Only when I'm in heat.

Ned REACTS to this, squeezing the container. A stream of 
mustard squirts out, hitting the front of Lola's dress.

			NED
	Oh! Sorry.

Flustered, he stuffs his hot dog into his inside jacket 
pocket, then tries to wipe the mustard off Lola's dress, 
smearing it all over her, making it worse. She watches him 
with a cool, detached gaze as he fumbles ingenuously.

Suddenly, Ned stops, looking off. He sees... Milo Crumley 
going into the PUBLIC RESTROOM. Ned starts to leave. Lola 
grabs his hand, holding it tightly against her breast.

			LOLA
	Where ya going?

			NED
	Get something to wipe it off.

			LOLA
	That's okay. You're doing just fine.

			NED
	I'll get you a wet paper towel.

He heads for the men's room... signaling to Arch, who's 
waiting in line at the Nacho stand. Arch motions at the long 
line... all UNIFORMED COPS... shrugging helplessly.

INT. MEN'S ROOM ON PIER - NIGHT

Several MEN are at the urinals. Milo, still wearing the panty 
hose over his head, washes his face at the sink. He looks 
up, sees Ned enter. Ned sees Milo... reacts, pulling the 
frankfurter out of his pocket and pointing it.

			NED
	Hold it right there, Milo!

The Men turn, seeing Ned pointing the frankfurter.

			RESTROOM PATRON
	Look out! He's got a weenie!

Milo bolts, slamming into Ned, knocking him back through the 
door of a stall, into the lap of the MAN inside.

EXT. MEN'S ROOM - NIGHT

Milo bursts out, colliding with Arch. They both go down in a 
flurry of Nacho chips and cheese. Arch helps Milo to his 
feet, apologizing profusely... picking up the gun that Milo 
dropped, handing it back to him. Milo sprints off down the 
pier.

A beat later, Ned bursts out the door... dashing after Milo.

ANGLE - ALONG THE PIER

Milo runs frantically, knocking people aside! He ducks into...

INT. BUMPER CAR PAVILION - NIGHT

...and drags a FLUSTERED MAN out of a bumper car, jumps in, 
and speeds away!

A beat later, Ned runs up, followed by Arch. Ned flashes his 
badge at a FRECKLE-FACED KID in one of the bumper cars.

			NED
	Police emergency! I need your car!

He pulls the kid out, jumps in, slaps a portable FLASHING 
RED LIGHT on the dashboard... then speeds off after Milo, a 
SIREN WAILING! He zig-zags through the crush of other bumper 
cars in the pavilion.

Ned's bumper car catches up with Milo, pulling alongside. 
Milo turns the wheel, RAMMING Ned! Ned RAMS him back, both 
bumper cars swerving violently... spraying SPARKS!

Ned SLAMS Milo's car again! Milo loses control, spins out 
and SMASHES into the pavillion railing!

Ned swerves to avoid a collision, but RAMS into two other 
bumper cars, wrenching to a grinding halt. A BEAT. The AIRBAG 
inflates in his bumper car.

Arch runs up as Ned pulls himself from the wreckage. They 
turn to see Milo leap from his mangled bumper car, leap over 
the pavillion railing and dash down the pier and into an 
alley between two buildings. A sign on the building says: 
DEAD END ALLEY.

Ned and Arch eye each other, shake their heads, and follow 
after Milo.

OMIT

Sequence omitted from original script.

IN THE ALLEY

Milo runs into a tall chain link fence at the end of the 
alley and scrambles up the wire mesh. Suddenly, Ned's hand 
shoots out, grabs Milo's ankle, yanking him down hard.

Milo jumps to his feet, swinging at Ned, who catches Milo's 
fist with his hand, stopping it cold... neatly snapping a 
handcuff on his wrist. He shoves Milo's arm against the fence 
and snaps the other cuff to the chainlink.

A SWITCHBLADE flashes out of Milo's other hand with a sharp 
CLICK! Milo slashes the blade at Ned, just missing his face. 
On the backswing, Ned parries with his own switchblade and 
flips Milo's knife away.

Milo pulls a .45 Calibre REVOLVER with his free hand! Ned 
shoves his finger into the end of the barrel. Milo looks 
surprised... then sneers, clicking the hammer back.

			NED
	You take science in high school, 
	Milo?

			MILO
	I skipped high school, cop!

			NED
	Then you're probably not familiar 
	with the theory of inverse 
	proportionate explosive dynamics.

			MILO
	What about it?

			NED
	If you fire a weapon with the barrel 
	obstructed, the explosive force 
	multiplies by twenty-three point 
	five nine eight and reverses on itself 
	with diametric polarity?

			MILO
	Yeah. So?

			NED
	The gun will blow up in your hand... 
	and it won't even scorch my pinkie.

			MILO
	Ha! That's just theoretical 
	hypothesis. Inverse proportionate 
	explosive dynamics has never been 
	demonstrated conclusively in a 
	laboratory environment.

			NED
	Oh yeah. Then pull the trigger, smart 
	guy. Let's find out.

Milo hesitates, unsure. Finally, he releases the gun. Ned 
raises it up on the end of his finger. Arch pulls it off 
with a loud POP!

Ned cuffs Milo's hands behind him... spins him around.

			NED
	You have the right to remain silent... 
	next... if you waive that right, 
	anything you say... next...

REVEAL ARCH

holding up a series of "cue cards"... as Ned reads from them.

			NED
	...may be used against you in a court 
	of law... next... You have the right 
	to an attorney... Do you have an 
	attorney?

			MILO
	Nahhhh!

			NED
	Then today's your lucky day...

He flips out a business card, handing it to Milo.

ANGLE - THE BUSINESS CARD

It reads... "Ned Ravine - Defense Attorney"

EXT. NED'S HOUSE - DAWN

Large. Expensive. Impressive. The name on the mailbox reads 
"Ned and Lana Ravine."

We begin to HEAR the O.S. SOUND of passionate lovemaking!

OMIT

Sequence omitted from original script.

								DISSOLVE TO:

INT. HOUSE - DAWN

The CAMERA MOVES up the stairs, into the bedroom. Still O.S., 
we hear more heavy breathing... urgent whispers... lust... 
passion... squeaky bedsprings!

A trail of clothes is scattered before us on the way to the 
bed... shoes, a dress, slip, bra, nylons, panties... greasy 
coveralls with a "Frank Kelbo - Mobile Mechanic" namepatch, 
dirty work boots, a wrench and a gigantic grease gun...

The bed shakes violently. A female VOICE calls the shots as 
various tools drop to the floor.

			LANA (O.S.)
	Oh yes, Frank! Adjust the stroke by 
	ten percent! That's it.
		(CLUNK! A wrench)
	Now tweak my points. Oh yes, oh yes!
		(THUNK! Pliers)
	You got it! Stabilize your ball joints 
	and grind my rear differential!
		(CLINK! Screwdriver)
	Now accelerate! Floor it! Lay rubber, 
	baby! VRRROOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMM!

A beat. The LIGHT clicks ON. LANA; a sexy redhead with a 
cool, manipulative edge, and FRANK; a slick, smarmy Lothario, 
lay under the sheets, panting, glistening with sweat.

Lana reaches for a pack of "Fatal 100's" on the bedside table.

			LANA
	Not bad for an auto mechanic...

			FRANK
		(grins, cocky)
	Yeah, well you're not so bad 
	yourself... for a lawyer's wife...

			LANA
	Better watch your tongue, sweetie, 
	or I'll have my husband arrest you.

			FRANK
	Busy man. Cop and a lawyer. When 
	does he ever find time for you?

She lights a cigarette... exhales a soft, gloomy cloud.

			LANA
	He doesn't. That's why I need you to 
	keep my engine tuned, Frank. Why 
	drive a jalopy when you can have a 
	hot rod?

			FRANK
	Maybe you should trade him in on a 
	new model.

			LANA
	I would... if I could make any money 
	on the deal.

			FRANK
		(reaches for her)
	Want to go for another test drive?

The SOUND of an automobile engine outside. Lana stops him.

			LANA
	Pull over and park it, Frank. I'm 
	still under warranty.

EXT. NED'S HOUSE - MORNING

Ned glances at the white van parked in the driveway, then 
takes note of his wife's silver Mercedes... sitting on floor 
jacks, the hood raised, tools spread out around it.

INT. HOUSE - THE KITCHEN - MORNING

Ned enters. Lana wears a diaphanous dressing gown, buttoned 
unevenly, hair disheveled. She smokes a cigarette.

			NED
	Morning sweetheart.

Ned kisses her on the back of the neck as he passes through 
the kitchen on his way to the dining room. She reacts with 
bored, contemptuous disinterest, picking up the coffee pot.

			LANA
	Uh huh. Want some coffee?

Ned steps back into the kitchen with his briefcase.

			NED
	No thanks.

Ned sees Frank sitting at the kitchen table, hair messed up, 
coveralls hastily pulled on inside-out. Frank is reading a 
copy of INSURANCE DIGEST magazine. A headline on the cover 
touts an article: "LIFE INSURANCE FOR YOUR CAT!... Cover All 
Nine Lives For The Price of One!" Ned's smile fades.

			LANA
	Frank here was just grabbing a little 
	before going back to work on my car.

He steps over to the table... gives Frank a cool stare.

			NED
	How long you been working on Lana's 
	Mercedes, Frank?

			FRANK
		(shrugs)
	Oh... I don't know... six, seven 
	weeks.

			NED
	And ya still haven't found the 
	problem?

			FRANK
		(a leering smile)
	Think I got my finger on it though.

Ned turns to Lana.

			NED
	I know what he's doing, Lana. I wasn't 
	born yesterday. He's not fixing your 
	car. He's SCREWING you!

Lana tenses up at this. Frank freezes. He figures they've 
been busted. He sits there, holding the magazine, not moving 
a muscle... as Ned turns on him.

			NED
	YOU are screwing my wife! I can see 
	what your game is, Frank. You open 
	up her hood, poke around in there... 
	squirt some lubrication in... play 
	around with all her parts... then 
	take an old used piston and stick it 
	in... then pull it out... in, out, 
	in, out! Every day! There's no end 
	to it. You just keep coming and 
	COMING!... and the bill just gets 
	bigger and BIGGER!

Lana braces herself against the sink, breathless... turned 
on by Ned's description. Ned goes to her, sympathetic.

			NED
	But you don't see it, do you, Lana? 
	You're too good... too pure. You 
	can't see the evil in people like 
	him.
		(turns to Frank)
	Well, you're not getting away with 
	it, pal. I'm pulling the plug! You're 
	fired!

			LANA
		(breathless)
	Ned... don't you have to be somewhere?

			NED
		(checks his watch)
	Oh... yeah. Thanks, honey. I'm late 
	for court.

He goes to kiss her mouth and she turns her cheek to him. He 
looks at her lovingly... touches her face tenderly.

			NED
	You are so naive.

He picks up his briefcase, gives Frank a nasty look, then 
exits thru the back door.

Lana and Frank stare at each other lustfully, really hot 
now! Frank sweeps the dishes off the table with his arm. 
Lana leaps into his arms, wrapping her legs around his waist. 
He lays her down on the kitchen table, standing over her.

Suddenly, Ned opens the back door, glaring right at Frank... 
not even noticing Lana on the table.

			NED
	Finish your coffee... then GET OUT!

He slams the door. A beat. Lana and Frank begin to devour 
each other with passionate kisses. Another beat. The front 
doorbell RINGS once... then again.

			FRANK
	Who's that?

			LANA
	Just the postman. He always rings 
	twice.

OMIT

Sequence omitted from original script.

INT. NED'S LAW OFFICE - DAY

Richly appointed with stately oak, walls lined with law books. 
As in all "Noir" thrillers, venetian blinds cast dramatic 
slashes of light and ceiling fans turn lazily in every room. 
Ned hurries in, rummaging through the files on his desk.

LAURA, a strikingly lovely brunette, enters from the outer 
office, files in hand. She is Ned's astute, dedicated, self-
sacrificing "girl-friday" and legal secretary. She keeps his 
life from spinning crazily apart. She absolutely adores him.

			NED
	Laura... do you know where...?

			LAURA
		(hands him file)
	Right here. The judge decided to 
	skip arraignment and take Milo direct 
	to trial. You're six minutes late, 
	but don't sweat it. You got Judge 
	Allen. He's always eleven minutes 
	late.

She picks up a lawbook, flips it open to a dog-eared page.

			LAURA
	I suggest you try Lemming versus 
	Florida, 1956... where the guy jumped 
	in the water and everybody followed.

			NED
		(thinks about it)
	Yeah. Good idea.

He smiles gratefully... drops the file into his briefcase.

Ned heads for the office washroom. Laura darts ahead of him 
into the washroom and turns the water on.

Ned steps in... splashes some water on his face. Laura grabs 
a towel from the rack where three small towels hang neatly... 
hands it to Ned. He dries his face, looking at her with 
genuine fondness and gratitude.

			NED
	I don't know what I'd do without 
	you?

She glances toward the toilet, notices it hasn't been flushed. 
She FLUSHES it, lowers the seat.

			LAURA
	Really?

She sits down on the toilet seat, watching him adoringly as 
he shaves with an electric razor.

			NED
	Laura, how long have you worked for 
	me?

			LAURA
	Two years, seven months, twenty-three 
	days, nineteen hours...
		(checks her watch)
	...six minutes and fifty-two seconds.
		(softly, to herself)
	...fifty-three... fifty-four... fifty-
	five... fifty-six...

			NED
	And when was the last time I gave 
	you a raise?

Laura neatly folds the end of the toilet paper into a point.

			LAURA
	Never. But that's okay. I don't need 
	a raise. In fact... I was thinking 
	of giving you a rebate on my salary.

He clicks off the razor, turns to look at her for a long 
moment, considering this, then...

			NED
	Naw. That's okay. You keep it.

He gives her a manly pat on the shoulder then casually tosses 
the towel onto the rack, where it hangs sloppily askew... 
right next to her face. He exits.

Laura stares at the towel with a tortured expression. The 
CAMERA PUSHES IN to her face as we see...

INT. ULTRA-MODERN BEACH HOUSE - DAY

Scrawled on a steamed-up bathroom mirror - FLASHBACK - CAPE 
COD - THREE YEARS EARLIER. A hand wipes the mirror off, 
revealing Laura... younger, longer hair, with a nasty black 
eye.

LAURA'S HUSBAND appears behind her, glaring insanely. He 
looks toward the towel rack.

There are three towels... with HIS - HIS - HIS embossed along 
the bottom edge. One towel hangs longer than the others.

			LAURA'S HUSBAND
	Did we forget something?

She meekly lines up all the towels.

			LAURA'S HUSBAND
	Did we forget something?

She meekly lines up all the towels.

INT. BEACH HOUSE KITCHEN - DAY

Laura's Husband pulls the cupboard open. All the cans and 
boxes are neatly stacked in straight lines. All except one. 
She straightens it... trembling with fear.

EXT. DECK OF BEACH HOUSE - DAY

He pulls her outside, nodding toward a line of tall PINE 
trees behind the house. They are all straight and even... 
except one, whose tall branches tower conspicuously above 
the rest.

He holds up a chainsaw, nodding toward the trees. Shaking 
and tearful... she backs into the house.

END FLASHBACK

BACK TO LAURA

SCREAMING out in terror! Ned rushes in, shaking her.

			NED
	Laura. Laura! What is it?

			LAURA
		(coming out of it)
	I'm okay, I'm okay. I just get a 
	bit... claustrophobic... in the 
	bathroom.

			NED
	Maybe we should try some prune juice.

He gives her shoulder a consoling squeeze, then exits. She 
shakily straightens the towels and regains her composure.

Ned opens a wardrobe closet in his office. He walks along, 
looking at thirty exactly identical blue suits, hanging 
neatly. Laura follows behind him. He stops and stares, 
indecisive.

			LAURA
	Wear the blue one.

INT. COURTROOM - DAY

Ned turns dramatically to face the jury.

			NED
	Ladies and gentlemen... I ask you... 
	does this look like the face of a 
	crook?

ANGLE - MILO CRUMLEY

sitting next to Laura at the defense table... STILL wearing 
the panty hose over his head.

BACK TO SCENE

			NED
	Of course it does. But the question 
	of my client's guilt or innocence is 
	not the issue here today. I'm certain 
	every member of the jury can clearly 
	see that he's guilty!

			BLIND JUROR
	I can't.

ANGLE ON NED - JURY'S POV

Ned ignores this, turning to look directly at the CAMERA as 
he addresses the jury... holding up a pair of nylon pantyhose.

			NED
	Put yourself in his shoes. Look 
	through his eyes. See the world the 
	way HE sees it!

He puts the pantyhose over the LENS, obscuring our view.

			NED
	Things just don't look the same. 
	It's fuzzy... and frightening!

NEW ANGLE - TO INCLUDE NED AND JURY

The nylon pantyhose are draped over the frightened face of a 
WOMAN JUROR. All the other Jurors are holding up their own 
socks and nylon stockings, trying to peer through them.

Ned steps over to Milo, motioning toward him.

			NED
	Ladies and gentlemen... Milo Crumley 
	is not the perpetrator here. He is 
	the VICTIM!

Milo unwraps a piece of bubble gum and pushes it into his 
panty-hose covered mouth, chewing the nylon and gum together.

			NED
	Like ALL of us... this man is the 
	unfortunate victim of these tragically 
	difficult economic times. And what 
	does that mean? He can't support his 
	family!

Ned motions toward the gallery, where we SEE...

...MILO'S WIFE and TWO CHILDREN, all wearing panty hose over 
their faces. Ned motions toward Milo.

			NED
	For God's sake!... He can't even 
	support his own FACE!

JUDGE ALLEN notices that Milo is chewing gum.

			JUDGE ALLEN
	Mr. Crumley... you cannot chew gum 
	in my courtroom... unless you have 
	enough for everyone.

Milo holds up a big plastic bag filled with bubble gum. Judge 
Allen grabs it, takes a piece of gum and hands it to the 
Bailiff.

			JUDGE ALLEN
	Bailiff. Pass these out.

The Bailiff takes the bag, offers one to Ned... who takes a 
piece, unwraps it and starts chewing. The Bailiff then 
proceeds to pass out gum to EVERYONE in the courtroom.

The JURY FOREMAN raises his hand and clears his throat.

			JUDGE ALLEN
	And don't forget the jury.

			NED
	And so, desperate and broke, with no 
	other options before him, Mr. Crumley 
	went to eleven Savings & Loans and 
	did what any of you would have done. 
	He stole back the money that the 
	S&Ls had stolen from him!

The courtroom erupts in CHEERS! Judge Allen raps the gavel.

			JUDGE ALLEN
		(interrupting)
	Mr. Ravine... please approach the 
	bench.

He does. The Judge leans toward him, reaching out to cover 
the microphone, covering the end of the gavel instead. The 
Judge's voice is AMPLIFIED over the courtroom speakers.

			JUDGE ALLEN
	You're not running for congress here, 
	so knock off the speeches and quit 
	inciting these brainless morons! Now 
	pick up the pace and wrap this son-
	of-a-bitch up! Call your first 
	witness.

Ned turns... looking out over the courtroom.

			NED
	I call... Detective Ned Ravine.

There is a surprised GASP from the crowd... and a loud MURMUR.

The BAILIFF holds out a video box. It's titled HOLY BIBLE - 
THE VIDEO. Ned puts one hand on it, raises the other.

			BAILIFF
	Do you swear to tell the truth, the 
	whole truth and nothing but the truth, 
	so help you God?

			NED
	I do.

Ned sits down... then gets up, his demeanor changing.

			NED
	Detective Ravine, at the time of the 
	arrest, did you read the defendant 
	his Miranda rights?

He slips back into the witness box.

			NED
	Of course. That's standard procedure.

Ned steps over to Arch, who is sitting in the first row of 
the gallery. Arch hands him the Miranda "cue cards."

			NED
	Are these the cards Officer Brooks 
	used to prompt you while reading Mr. 
	Crumley his rights?

He lays them on the corner of the stand... then slips into 
the chair. He picks the cards up and flips thru them. On the 
back we can see scribbled... "NED'S IDIOT CARDS"

			NED
	Yeah. These are them.

Ned jumps to his feet, pacing dramatically, grabbing the 
cards.

			NED
	Reading from the cards now... quote 
	"You have the right to remain silent, 
	if you waive that right, anything 
	you say... may be used against you 
	in a court of law." Is that right?

			NED
		(back in the chair)
	That's right.

			NED
		(stands up, announces)
	WRONG! The official Miranda warning 
	is... "anything you say CAN be used 
	against you in a court of law." Not 
	"may"... "CAN!"
		(on the attack)
	Don't you know the difference between 
	"can" and "may", Detective? Every 
	school kid knows "can" is a verb 
	that indicates ability to perform, 
	while "may" is a verbal auxiliary 
	indicating the permission to act.

Ned pivots into the witness stand, changing his attitude 
from aggressive attorney to defensive, angry witness as he 
hits the chair.

			NED
	I didn't have time to worry about 
	past participles or interrogative 
	pronouns! I was trying to protect 
	society from a deranged MADMAN!
		(leaps up, pointing)
	But this ivy league fop...!!!

The courtroom ERUPTS! The Judge bangs the gavel. Ned strides 
proudly toward the defense table.

			NED
	I have no more use for this witness.

			JUDGE ALLEN
	Mr. Ravine...

Ned turns. The Judge motions with a finger for Ned to approach 
the bench. Ned does, resting his hand on it.

			JUDGE ALLEN
	I'm dismissing this case on the 
	grounds of improper grammar.

The Judge smacks Ned's hand with a ruler!

			NED
	Ow!

			PROSECUTOR
		(jumps up)
	But your Honor...!

			JUDGE ALLEN
	I know, I know. It's a technicality. 
	But it's the kind of technicality 
	that makes the American legal system 
	what it is today! Court's adjourned!

The Judge mistakenly picks up the microphone and whacks it 
on the bench like a gavel. BAM! BAM! BAM! It is DEAFENING! 
Everyone covers their ears in pain.

The THX Sound System Logo appears at the bottom of the 
screen... along with "The Courtroom Is Listening"

INT. NED'S LAW OFFICE - LATE AFTERNOON

Ned turns the key... enters through the private door. He 
HEARS the plaintive sound of a saxophone playing Lola's 
Theme... his eyes drawn to the slightly opened door to the 
outer office.

ANGLE - NED'S POV THRU OPENING

A gorgeous pair of legs, sleek nylons, high-heeled shoes.

There are several CANDY WRAPPERS, CIGARETTE BUTTS and other 
pieces of TRASH stuck to the bottom of one shoe.

NED

pushes the door open. It's Lola. She wears a tight white 
dress, long white gloves and broad-brimmed hat. The hat tips 
up slowly, revealing her eyes.

			LOLA
	I waited. You never came back.

Ned reaches in his pocket, pulls out a wet paper towel.

			NED
	I got busy. Here's that paper towel 
	I promised.

			LOLA
	Thanks...

			NED
	How'd you get in? The door was locked.

Lola proudly holds up a tiny bobbie pin. She smiles.

			LOLA
	It's miraculous what a real woman 
	can do... with a bobbie pin.

Ned looks at the door. The frame and lock have been brutally 
chewed away, as if someone used a jackhammer on them! She 
pulls out a pack of cigarettes... BLACK LUNG LITES.

			LOLA
		(offering)
	Cigarette?

			NED
	No... thanks. They're bad for ya.

He goes to the water cooler. She lights up, exhaling a soft 
cloud of smoke through a sleepy smile, her voice purring.

			LOLA
	Yes, I know. I like things that are 
	bad for me.
		(touching lawbooks)
	So... I hear you go both ways.

Ned hesitates... about to drink from the paper cup.

			NED
	Only once. It was a fraternity prank. 
	I never saw him again.

He gulps the water down, crumbles the cup in his hand.

			LOLA
	No, I mean... you're a cop and a 
	lawyer.

			NED
	Oh. Yeah. Well, there's a lot of 
	scum out there on the streets... but 
	they all deserve a fair and costly 
	trial.

Ned turns, tries to casually "dunk" the crumpled cup in the 
waste basket. He misses.

Laura enters with a huge pile of lawbooks in her arms. She 
sees Ned miss the basket and darts over as he bends down to 
pick it up.

			LAURA
	I'll get that.

She picks it up and tosses it into the waste basket.

			NED
	Oh... Laura... this is, uh...

			LOLA
	Lola Cain.

Laura sets the heavy load of books on the desk and steps 
toward Lola, extending her hand. Lola takes her time removing 
the long white glove... finally reaching out and shaking 
Laura's hand with a condescending air.

			LOLA
		(sarcastic)
	So lovely to meet you, Laura.

Ned grabs the books and turns to the bookshelf, replacing 
each lawbook in its proper slot.

The "handshake" between Lola and Laura turns tense, then 
aggressive, eventually becoming a "standing Indian wrestle" 
as they try to force each other off balance with sheer force. 
Ned is oblivious to the battle behind him, chattering away.

			NED
	Gotta keep these darn books in their 
	right place or we'll never find the 
	ones we need. Let's see, Q thru M... 
	R thru B... W thru F...

Laura suddenly whirls Lola around, putting her in an arm 
lock. But Lola elbows Laura in the stomach! Laura doubles 
over. Lola feigns sympathy, taking her hand... then spins, 
twisting Laura's arm, flipping her head over heels!

Laura lands on the couch... upside down... gasping. Lola 
strikes a haughty pose, still holding her lit cigarette. She 
takes a drag. Laura checks her watch, then tumbles off the 
couch, landing on her feet. She straightens her skirt.

			LAURA
	It's getting late. I'll give you a 
	ride home, Ned.

Finished with the books, Ned turns... smiles.

			NED
	I have my car.

			LAURA
	I'll tow you.

			NED
	Not today. You don't need to wait. 
	I'll see you tomorrow.

Lola looks at Laura... icy, haughty, triumphant. Laura moves 
reluctantly toward the door, sees the lock and door frame 
chewed to pieces... whirls around, heads back toward Ned.

			LAURA
	I should call someone to fix this...

			NED
	Tomorrow...

She instantly spins around, heads back toward the door...

			LAURA
	I'll call from home.

...and exits. Ned sits down on the corner of the desk. Lola 
sits in the chair across from him.

			LOLA
	I think I should warn you, Mr. 
	Ravine... I'm not wearing any 
	underwear.

She crosses her legs suggestively... then slowly, enticingly, 
re-crosses them in the other direction.

Unimpressed, Ned opens Laura's desk drawer... pulls a pair 
of sexy lace panties from a Kleenex-style dispenser box 
labeled "PANDORA'S POP-UP PANTIES"... which pulls another 
pair up into position. He tosses the panties to Lola.

			NED
	Try these on.

She does... very, very slowly and seductively... as they 
talk.

			NED
	So... what can I do for you?

			LOLA
	I've run across some... papers... 
	and I thought you might be able to 
	tell me what they are. You see, I'm 
	not very experienced when it comes 
	to... papers.

			NED
	I'll help you Miss Cain, if I'm able. 
	Do you have the... papers... here?

			LOLA
	No... they're at home. I thought you 
	might stop by...

			NED
	I'm on duty tonight.

			LOLA
	Don't they ever give you a night 
	off?

			NED
	Yeah. Tomorrow.

			LOLA
		(picks up cigarette)
	Why don't we meet tomorrow evening 
	then?

She finishes pulling the panties on with a sultry smile... 
"snapping" the elastic waistband. She goes to the door, 
pauses... turns to him.

			LOLA
	I'll let you know where.

			NED
		(steps over to her)
	What's wrong with my office?

She looks around, exhaling another cloud of smoke.

			LOLA
	Nothing a good interior decorator 
	couldn't fix.

She opens the door. Behind her, in the hall, we see Dizzy, 
the saxophone player, wailing away on "Lola's Theme."

CLOSE ON LOLA

She takes a final, long drag on her cigarette, then reaches 
O.S. with it... toward Ned.

			LOLA
	Take care of this for me, will ya?

With a sultry smile, she turns and leaves, closing the door.

ANGLE ON NED

The cigarette is stuck in his nose.

INT. NED'S HOUSE - NIGHT

The front door swings open. Frank is standing there, dressed 
in a cheap, loose-fitting suit and a T-shirt.

			FRANK
	I came back for my shower cap.

Lana, now wearing the diaphanous gown, pulls him inside. She 
kisses him hungrily, slipping a frilly plastic shower cap 
with a gaudy floral design on his head.

			LANA
	Yeah, well you came to the right 
	place.

She walks to the living room. Frank follows, still wearing 
the shower cap. Lana snaps her fingers.

			LANA
	Sit down.

He sits in a chair, looking around.

			FRANK
	Where is he?

			LANA
	On duty all night. By the time he 
	wraps up his reports, it'll be close 
	to noon tomorrow.

She sits on the couch, picks up a stack of papers.

			LANA
	I was just reading over...

She looks up at Frank. Sees the shower cap.

			LANA
	Take off the hat, Frank.

He slips the shower cap off as Lana continues.

			LANA
	I was just reading over my husband's 
	insurance policies. You wouldn't 
	know anything about insurance, would 
	you, Frankie?

			FRANK
	Yeah, matter of fact, I sell policies 
	part-time. I got half a brain... or 
	didn't you notice?

			LANA
	I musta had my eye on something else.
		(hands him papers)
	How about a translation.

He flips through, scanning the pages, shrugging.

			FRANK
	Standard accident policy... all the 
	usual stuff... blah, blah, blah. The 
	face value is... Wow. Not bad. Three 
	million bucks!
		(flips page)
	And there's a triple indemnity rider.

			LANA
	Meaning?

			FRANK
	Aw, it's just something agents throw 
	in so we can boost the premium. If 
	the policy holder dies under very 
	specific conditions, it pays off 
	three times the face value of the 
	policy.

			LANA
	Nine million dollars...?

			FRANK
	Yeah... but it's a sure bet for the 
	company. Nobody ever collects.

			LANA
	Why not?

			FRANK
	Well, like here... it only pays off 
	if he's shot with a pistol, falls 
	from a moving northbound train and 
	drowns in a fresh water stream.

			LANA
	All three?

			FRANK
	See what I mean, sweetheart? What 
	are the odds of that?

			LANA
	It could happen.
		(dramatic beat)
	Suppose it did happen?

			FRANK
	Then you'd be rich.

			LANA
	Then we'd be rich.

			FRANK
	What're you sayin'...?

She drops to her knees in front of him, her face close to 
his, speaking with a persuasive urgency.

			LANA
	We're gonna kill the son-of-a-bitch! 
	And I know exactly how! He has a 
	legal symposium in Santa Barbara 
	this weekend... All we have to do is 
	get him to take the train up instead 
	of driving.

			FRANK
	How we gonna do that? Didn't you 
	tell me he hates trains?

			LANA
	That's where you come in, baby. You're 
	gonna rig his car so it doesn't work. 
	That should be no problem for you.

She gets up, walks to the adjoining room... snapping her 
fingers at her side. He follows.

She steps to a table, pulls the cover off an elaborate scale-
model of Dealey Plaza and a train station, complete with HO-
Scale model trains chugging around the tracks.

She uses a pointer to trace the route to the depot.

			LANA
	Then... we give him a lift to the 
	train station... through Dealey Plaza, 
	past the Book Suppository and around 
	the grassy knoll...

			FRANK
	Isn't that out of our way?

Ignoring this, she turns the LIGHTS OFF, walks over to a 
screen and picks up a remote control. She clicks the button. 
A SLIDE PROJECTOR comes on, throwing an IMAGE on Frank's 
back. We can read the words: THE PLAN.

			LANA
	Move, Frank.

He moves over. "THE PLAN" appears on the screen.

			LANA
	And pay attention.

As she talks, IMAGES appear on the screen, accompanying her 
rapid spiel. We see: a shot of the depot, a map of the rail 
route, a gun, a river, a Bingo game, baseball action and a 
huge dollar sign!

			LANA
	Ten minutes out of the station he'll 
	be standing in the vestibule between 
	cars... trying to avoid a panic 
	attack. Fourteen minutes and ten 
	seconds out, the train crosses the 
	Santa Ynez River. So at thirteen 
	minutes and fifty-four seconds, I 
	shoot him, shove him out the door... 
	he hits the river and drowns. Bingo! 
	A triple play. We're rich!

The lights click ON.

			FRANK
	You been thinking about this a lot, 
	haven't you?

			LANA
	No. It just came to me.
		(closer, seductive)
	I had this image of a big, powerful, 
	throbbing train... plunging into a 
	long, dark, wet tunnel.

They embrace, kissing passionately, dropping out of frame. 
The model train CHUGS faster, the train whistle SHRIEKING a 
long "Woooooooo-woooooooooo!"... racing into a model tunnel.

INT. POLICE STATION - SQUAD ROOM - NIGHT

Ned and Arch drag in a bunch of bad-ass, multi-ethnic GANG 
MEMBERS they've just busted. Ned angrily shoves one of the 
toughest gang members against the wall... losing his cool.

			NED
	Stand over there and shut up!

			GANG MEMBER #1
	Hey, man, we got rights! Don't you 
	be layin' no deleterious malfeasance 
	on us.

Ned goes ballistic and slams him into the wall again!

			NED
	Watch your mouth, punk! I don't want 
	to hear language like that!

Arch grabs Ned by the shoulder, pulling him back, calming 
him.

			ARCH
	Whoa, hold on, hoss! Take it easy. 
	You seem a little tense tonight. 
	What is it?

Ned regains his composure. He's depressed.

			NED
	Aw... I don't know. I guess it's 
	Lana. It's just... I know she wants 
	to have a baby so bad...

Gang Member #1 steps closer, listening.

			NED
	...but I never get to spend any time 
	with her. And when I am home... it's 
	like she's, you know... avoiding 
	sex.

Gang Member #1 steps closer, listening.

			GANG MEMBER #1
	You should try to be more sensitive, 
	man. More romantic. Bring her flowers.

He steps between them, putting his arm around Ned's shoulder.

			GANG MEMBER #1
	Try to understand how she feels. 
	After all...

He steps back, begins to SING "Try A Little Tenderness"...

			GANG MEMBER #1
	She may be weary... Women do get 
	weary... Wearing that same old shabby 
	dress... But when she's weary... Try 
	a little ten-der-ness...

The other Gang Members join in on the SECOND VERSE with a 
sweet, mellow street-corner harmony as back-up... and some 
smooth group choreography.

The COPS on duty listen raptly, getting maudlin and dewey-
eyed. Tears roll down the cheeks of the BOOKING SERGEANT.

The lights dim. A big, gruff COP makes eyes at a HOOKER being 
booked... and they start to slow dance.

Arch watches all this with a sentimental smile, munching on 
his Nachos. When the song ends, Arch puts a comforting hand, 
covered with Nacho cheese, on Ned's shoulder.

			NED
	That can't be it. I'm the tenderest 
	guy on the force. Nah... I think 
	she's just afraid she won't be able 
	to get pregnant.

			ARCH
	What's to be afraid! It's like making 
	breakfast! You bring home the bacon... 
	she's got the eggs. Ya scramble it 
	up. Ba-da-boom ba-da-bing! She's got 
	an omelette in the oven!
		(a beat, then)
	Why don't you knock off early... go 
	home. It'd be nice for Lana to wake 
	up in the morning and find you there 
	for a change.

			NED
	Naw... I can't. I got all this 
	paperwork.

			ARCH
	Don't worry about that.

			GANG MEMBER #1
	We'll do our own paperwork, man!

			OTHER GANG MEMBERS
	Yeah! We'll fill out all that shit.

Ned nods, smiles and gratefully "high-fives" the Gang Members 
as he heads for the door.

INT. THE HOUSE - LATER THAT NIGHT

The house is dark. A key turns in the lock and Ned enters.

IN THE BEDROOM

It's dark. Ned quietly undresses and slips into bed.

INT. BEDROOM - CLOSE ON LANA - DAWN

Sunlight creeps through the windows. Lana's eyes flutter 
open. She sees Ned beside her... sleeping. Suddenly, it hits 
her. She turns! Frank is on the other side, curled up, 
snoring. She's laying between both men!

Lana elbows Frank. He stirs, groggy. She covers his mouth... 
indicating Ned. Frank's eyes bug out! He slips out of bed. 
The bed frame SQUEAKS LOUDLY! Frank freezes. Ned sleeps on 
steadily.

Frank grabs his clothes. An unending torrent of coins fall 
out of his pants pockets, CLANGING on the floor! He freezes. 
Ned sleeps on. Frank retrieves the coins, clumsily stepping 
on the TV REMOTE CONTROL.

A high-tech, sleekly designed TELEVISION MONITOR rises up... 
clicks ON. Frank tries frantically to push the set down, but 
it keeps rising into position. An IMAGE appears. It's WILLARD 
SCOTT, doing the weather on the TODAY SHOW.

Frank grabs the remote control, frantically pounding on all 
the buttons. The VOLUME goes up... SOUND BLASTING!

			WILLARD SCOTT
		(on television)
	...and Mrs. Prudy Ann Camomile of 
	Delphi, Georgia is one-hundred and 
	thirteen! What a gorgeous hunk of 
	female! Smokes three cigars a day, 
	drinks a straight shot of vodka at 
	bedtime... and still has sex!

The alarm clock goes off, CLANGING LOUDLY! Lana dives for 
it, slamming her hand down, killing the alarm.

Going for a double-play, she flings the clock at the TV, 
nailing the on/off switch! Silence. Ned is still out cold.

Frank moves toward the door... but with each step the floor 
CREAKS LOUDLY! He turns the knob. It CLUNKS! He pulls the 
door open v-e-r-y s-l-o-w-l-y and it CRE-E-E-E-A-K-S like 
the piercing metal brakes of a train!

He blows Lana a kiss, then pulls the door closed very gently. 
It sticks. He pulls harder. The knob pops off in his hand 
and he falls backward, tumbling down the stairs with a HUGE 
RACKET! Ned doesn't stir. Finally it's SILENT. Lana exhales.

A SMALL BIRD lands on the sill of the open window, trilling 
a sweet little "CHIRP." Ned sits bolt upright, irritated.

			NED
	Damn birds!

He grabs his shoe, heaving it toward the open window.

EXT. NED'S HOUSE - MORNING

Frank glances back up at the bedroom window with an arrogant 
smirk. WHAP! Ned's shoe hits him right in the face!

EXT. COURTHOUSE - DAY

Ned comes down the courthouse steps. He pauses in the street, 
glimpsing the back of a WOMAN passing nearby... a STUNNING 
BLOND decked out in a clinging dress and fashionable hat... 
a long strip of toilet paper trailing from her high heel 
shoe. It must be LOLA. He turns to watch her.

A HORN BLARES! BRAKES SCREECH! The SOUND OVERLAPS to...

INT. NED'S LAW OFFICE - DAY

The door opens. Ned enters, looking terrible. Suit ripped, 
hair messed up, bruised and battered, briefcase crushed.

			LAURA
	My God, Ned... you look like you 
	were hit by a bus.

			NED
	I was.
		(notices)
	Who's in my office?

			LAURA
	Max Shady's mother.

			NED
	Not again.

INSIDE THE OFFICE

MRS. SHADY, an older woman with a pleasant appearance, sits 
in an overstuffed leather chair. Ned and Laura enter.

			NED
	Hello, Mrs. Shady.

Ned goes straight to his office closet, pulls out an identical 
blue suit... and starts stripping off his tattered clothes.

			NED
	Laura... check on my insurance. Make 
	sure it's paid up.

Laura reluctantly returns to the outer office.

			MRS. SHADY
	Good idea, Mr. Ravine. My son, Max, 
	is getting out of prison tomorrow.

			NED
		(checks his watch)
	Gee, has it been seven years already?

			MRS. SHADY
	Seven long, miserable years in the 
	slammer. And he's a bit pissed off.

			NED
	Well, being locked in a tiny room 
	with no TV can make a guy feel pretty 
	tense.

			MRS. SHADY
	I'm very concerned about him, Mr. 
	Ravine. He said you were a two-bit 
	shyster... and he's going to rip 
	your head off and use it for a bowling 
	ball!

He goes to her, putting a comforting hand on her shoulder, 
looking her right in the eye, attempting to provide solace.

			NED
	I'm sure the experience wasn't all 
	negative. He probably made a lot of 
	friends...

			MRS. SHADY
		(ever hopeful)
	You think?

			NED
	...learned a useful trade...

			MRS. SHADY
	Oh yes... live autopsies...

			NED
	...caught up on all those books he 
	wanted to read...

She struggles to her feet feebly...

			MRS. SHADY
	Maybe so... but he said he's going 
	to punch you in the testicles...

She hauls off and PUNCHES him like a pile driver! WHAM! He 
doubles over, gasping.

			MRS. SHADY
	...smash your face...

She KNEES him in the face, raising him up... then nails him 
with a devastating RIGHT CROSS, spinning him around. He 
collapses over the desk.

			MRS. SHADY
	...and decimate your wardrobe.

She grabs the tail of his suit jacket and rips it up the 
back!

			MRS. SHADY
	And I wouldn't want that to happen.
		(spanks his butt)
	He's a naughty naughty boy. I just 
	thought I should warn you.

She turns and shuffles out, passing through the outer office.

			MRS. SHADY
		(to Laura)
	Bye for now.
		(pauses by desk)
	Oh... may I have a cookie?

			LAURA
		(at file cabinet)
	Sure.

She grabs a handful of cookies and casually flings them at 
Laura... as she heads out the door.

			MRS. SHADY
	Thank yooooooooou.

Laura rushes into Ned's office with the file folder. He 
staggers unsteadily by the desk.

			LAURA
	Oh my God, Ned.

			NED
	I hate when she comes to see me.

			LAURA
	Don't you realize, Ned?... you could 
	be in real danger.

			NED
		(sees file)
	What's that?

			LAURA
	Extreme peril. You know, the risk of 
	personal bodily harm.

			NED
		(points at file)
	No... I mean that.

			LAURA
	Your insurance file. But the policy's 
	missing. Did you take it home?

			NED
	I don't think so.

Laura looks puzzled... wondering where it might be. Then...

			LAURA
	Oh, wait a second...

She goes to her desk in the outer office, digs through a 
drawer. Suddenly, she GASPS!

She is holding...

A FRAMED PHOTOGRAPH

of her abusive HUSBAND... sneering. A circle has been drawn 
around his head with lipstick and a diagonal line slashed 
across his face.

MATCH DISSOLVE TO: FLASHBACK

HER HUSBAND'S FACE

peers out through a sailboat porthole at stormy seas. A piece 
of masking tape stuck to the glass matches the diagonal line.

INT. CABIN OF SAILBOAT - NIGHT

Laura's Husband turns from the porthole. Laura cowers.

The boat pitches and heaves, disturbing all the neatly hung 
towels, emblazoned with MINE - MINE - MINE across the bottom 
edge. Laura's Husband reacts with a crazed look in his eyes.

Laura makes a break for it, running up on deck.

EXT. SAILBOAT IN STORM - NIGHT

Laura's Husband scrambles up onto the deck, looking fore and 
aft. Laura's vanished! He looks out to sea, calling...

			LAURA'S HUSBAND
	Lau-raaaaa!

EXT. BEACH - NIGHT

Laura paddles ashore, grasping a little kid's inflatable 
float ring. She struggles onto the sand and looks out to 
sea, triumphant... tossing the plastic float aside.

MONTAGE - ULTRA CONTEMPO BEACH HOUSE - NIGHT

-- Laura rushes in, tracking water all through the house.

-- Laura cuts an inch of hair from her amazingly long, very 
wet tresses, then puts on a WIG... that is also LONG and 
WET!

-- Laura retrieves a bra and a package of Twinkies from a 
secret hiding place... and stuffs them into a small brown 
paper bag.

-- Laura hurriedly mops up her water tracks, then...

-- She uses an industrial buffer to wax the hardwood floor.

-- Laura removes her wedding ring... throws it in the toilet. 
She reaches for the handle to flush it... hesitates, seeing 
the "CONSERVE WATER - THIS MEANS YOU!" sticker on the toilet. 
She reaches into the bowl and retrieves the ring.

-- On the deck, Laura throws the wedding ring toward the 
ocean. A SEAGULL swoops down, snatching it in mid-air and 
flies off.

OMIT

Sequence omitted from original script.

-- In the bathroom... the Seagull flies in through the open 
window, lands on the back of the toilet and drops the ring... 
into the toilet bowl!

EXT. THE BEACH - NEXT MORNING

Laura's Husband reaches into the surf and picks up the 
deflated float ring. He looks at it with a cruel sneer.

INT. BEACH HOUSE - BATHROOM

Laura's Husband fishes Laura's wedding ring out of the toilet 
bowl... looking off with demonic rage!

END FLASHBACK MONTAGE

THE CAMERA PULLS BACK

from Laura's SCREAMING mouth! Her eyes are filled with pure 
terror! A GIGANTIC wave of WATER splashes in her face!

We see Ned... holding a tiny empty paper cup in his hand. 
Laura is completely drenched!

			NED
	Laura! Are you alright? That was a 
	very long flashback you had.

She snaps out of it, sputtering.

			LAURA
	Yes... I know. It's okay. I'm just a 
	little... pre-menstrual.

She goes to her desk, still upset. She picks up the message 
spike and turns to Ned.

			LAURA
	That Lola Cain... "person"... stopped 
	by. She left this!

She thrusts it toward Ned's face! There's a business card 
stuck on the end. He pulls it off.

ANGLE - CLOSE ON BUSINESS CARD

It reads: LE HOT CLUB! No Air Conditioning... And Proud Of 
It! Scribbled next to it is the message... "Meet me at 7:30". 
The edges of the card are scorched.

INT. LE HOT CLUB - NIGHT

It's dark, seductive, smoky, crowded... and HOT. Everybody 
is dripping with sweat and holding unlit cigarettes.

Ned enters, sees Lola sitting on a stool at the bar, one leg 
crossed provocatively over the other. A beer can is stuck to 
the gum on the bottom of her shoe. It falls off with a CLUNK.

He sits on the stool next to her. She looks at him, smiles.

			NED
	Oh yeah, before I forget... you asked 
	me to take care of this.

He reaches into his jacket pocket, pulls out a LIT CIGARETTE. 
It has a very long ash.

			LOLA
	Thanks...

She takes it... inhales a drag, then lets the smoke flow out 
through her smile. It flows out for a loooooooooong time! 
More smoke than she could ever have inhaled. Then...

			NED
	You smoke too much.
		(looks around, then)
	It's hot tonight.

			LOLA
	Is it? I never know. My body heat 
	runs about twenty degrees above 
	normal.

He notices the drink in her hand is BOILING. A saxophone 
begins to softly wail Lola's Theme. Ned looks over to see a 
QUARTET, featuring Dizzy on sax. The GUITARIST spontaneously 
bursts into FLAME! A FIREMAN, in full gear, jumps up from 
the bar and puts out the blaze with a fire extinguisher. 
None of the band members miss a beat.

			NED
	Maybe we should look for a cooler 
	place.

			LOLA
	I doubt we'll find one. Even the 
	wind chimes on my porch aren't moving 
	much these days. They keep thudding 
	softly, like dairy cows bumping butts 
	in the night. I go out there expecting 
	to find a cool breeze... but it's 
	just a lot of hot air.

Ned glances at the MALE CUSTOMERS... sitting at the bar across 
from them. They're staring coldly at Ned.

			NED
	What're they lookin' at?

			LOLA
	A lot of them have tried that seat. 
	You're the first one's lasted this 
	long.

			NED
	I feel honored.

			LOLA
	Don't. It's broken.

A beat of realization, then the stool collapses with a CRASH! 
Ned pulls himself back up and drags another stool over.

			NED
	Did you bring the... papers?

			LOLA
	No. I thought you might come over...

			NED
	Sure. I'll drive you.

			LOLA
	I brought my own car.

			NED
	I'll follow you then.

			LOLA
	I know it sounds silly, but would 
	you leave first... wait in your car? 
	I come here a lot and I wouldn't 
	want those men to think I'm "easy"... 
	a slut who'll jump into bed with 
	anyone at the drop of a hat. But if 
	you leave first...

			NED
	...they'll think I'm a putz for 
	passing up a sure thing.

Lola stares at Ned for a long moment... then SLAPS his face. 
He doesn't move, remaining staunchly macho. Then, suddenly, 
she SLUGS HIM so hard it knocks him over the top of the bar!

			LOLA
		(for all to hear)
	Now leave me alone!

She pauses to give him a flicker of a COY SMILE... then picks 
up her drink and moves to a nearby table. Ned struggles to 
his feet and staggers to the door.

INT. NED'S CAR - NIGHT

Ned is a mess! Blood trickles from the side of his mouth. 
Shirt soaked in sweat. He turns the radio ON. LOLA'S THEME 
starts playing.

A small ceiling fan hangs from the interior roof of his car, 
turning slowly. The venetian blinds on his side windows are 
partially open, letting in slashes of dramatic light.

ANGLE - HIS POV OF ROAD

He's following Lola's car. It signals and turns left.

INT. NED'S CAR - NIGHT

Still hot, Ned pulls the chain on the ceiling fan. It spins 
faster. MUCH faster! The car becomes like a wind tunnel!

EXT. LOLA'S HOUSE - NIGHT

The two cars enter a long drive, coming to a stop near a 
large two story house surrounded by lush greenery.

Ned climbs out... his wind-blown hair flattened on one side 
and sticking out crazily.

ANGLE - LOLA'S CAR DOOR - NED'S POV

It opens. Lola's legs swing out. The CAMERA PANS DOWN her 
long legs to her feet. The car floormat is stuck to one shoe. 
She casually shakes it off... going to the front door.

INT. LOLA'S HOUSE - NIGHT

They enter. It's DARK. Ned squints into the shadows.

			NED
	Well, here we are... in the dark.

			LOLA
	I have The Clapper.

			NED
	You what?

Lola CLAPS her hands twice and all the LIGHTS COME ON. She 
smiles at him... drops her car keys on the hall table, then 
goes up the stairs.

Ned drops his car keys on the table too and follows her.

EXT. PORCH OFF BEDROOM - NIGHT

Lola clicks on a porch light. She and Ned step out. Dozens 
of small boxes hang around the perimeter of the porch.

			LOLA
	My wind chimes.

Ned steps over, running his hands along the boxes. They "thud" 
against each other.

			NED
	You know, these would work a lot 
	better if you took them out of the 
	boxes.

He slips several boxes off, releasing clusters of the metal 
chimes. They "tinkle" and "clang" melodically in the breeze.

			LOLA
	Well well... I guess you have been 
	around. I'm impressed.

She moves close, coming on to him. Ned feels uneasy.

			NED
	Why don't we take a look at those... 
	papers?

			LOLA
		(remembering)
	Papers. Right.

INT. DRESSING AREA OFF BEDROOM - NIGHT

Lola comes in, looks around, then down. She removes her shoe, 
pulling off two scraps of paper stuck to the gum on her heel.

INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT

Ned is looking through a book... "KAMIKAZE KAMA SUTRA - The 
Encyclopedia of Deadly Sexual Positions." Lola comes back 
in, hands Ned the two scraps of paper.

			NED
	That's it? These are the... papers?

			LOLA
	Yes. They're so confusing to me. Can 
	you tell me what they are?

He checks them out... shrugs. It's obvious.

			NED
	This one's a laundry receipt... and 
	the other one's an expired lottery 
	ticket.

He hands them back to her, but she gently pushes them away.

			LOLA
	No. You keep them... as a memento of 
	our time together.

She slips them into his jacket pocket... then sensuously 
slides her hands around him, grabbing his buns, pulling him 
closer.

			LOLA
	I'm so grateful. How can I ever repay 
	you for all you've done?

			NED
	Cash would be nice.

			LOLA
	Isn't there some other way?

			NED
	I suppose you could wash my car.

			LOLA
	No, I mean, isn't there something 
	else you want? Something I could 
	give you?

She seductively starts to slide the jacket off his shoulders.

			NED
	Hey... slow down... there's a speed 
	limit in this state. Sixty-five miles 
	an hour.

			LOLA
	How fast was I going, officer?

			NED
	Oh, about a hundred and twenty-three.

			LOLA
	Suppose you pull me over and frisk 
	me?

			NED
	Suppose I let you off with a warning?

			LOLA
	Suppose I find a cop with a bigger 
	nightstick?

			NED
	Suppose I put you under arrest for 
	being a bad girl with bad thoughts?

			LOLA
	Suppose you handcuff me to the bed?

			NED
		(rapid run-on)
	Suppose I do and then we lose the 
	key and while I'm gone to get a 
	duplicate made the house catches on 
	fire and I can't get back to save 
	you because the bridge is washed out 
	and so you die a horrible death 
	toasted like a Polish sausage on a 
	flaming spit!
		(shakes his head)
	Nah... I better be going.

He turns and leaves. She is stunned, confused, breathless.

EXT. FRONT DOOR - NIGHT

Ned opens the door, pauses, turns... as Lola joins him there. 
She looks into his eyes with desire.

			LOLA
	You're not so tough. Last chance.

She moves her lips close to his, about to kiss him. Then...

			NED
	No thanks. I got a cold shower and a 
	wife who trusts me waiting at home.

			LOLA
	What's the matter? Don't you want 
	me? It's the way I look, isn't it?

He steps out, pauses... turns to her.

			NED
	Don't forget to lock up.

Ned pulls the door shut. The lock CLICKS. He pauses by his 
car, realizing something, heaves a sigh, goes back to the 
door.

He tries the knob, but the door is locked. He looks through 
the small window. He sees Lola standing inside... breathing 
heavily, bracing herself against the staircase bannister, 
hand to her heaving chest as if to calm a pounding heart.

He pushes against the door. It won't budge. He goes to the 
large window, gazing inside. She slides one hand enticingly 
across her breast and thigh, striking a seductive pose.

He points toward the door, motioning for her to unlock it. 
She looks away. Frustrated, Ned tries the window. It's locked.

He picks up a wrought iron chair, SLAMS it into the window! 
The heavy chair falls apart. The glass doesn't even vibrate!

He sees a riding power mower in the driveway... jumps into 
the seat, starts the engine... barreling toward the front of 
the house! THUNDER CRASHES and LIGHTNING FLASHES in the sky!

He PLOWS into the side of the house, SMASHING a huge hole 
thru the wall!... MOWING a swath in the carpet!

Lola GASPS. Ned climbs off the mower, moving toward her. She 
opens her arms, breathless. The MUSIC SWELLS dramatically! 
She intercepts him, embracing him passionately.

			LOLA
	I knew you'd come back...

			NED
		(looking past her)
	I forgot my car keys.

He struggles free, grabbing his car keys from the hall table. 
She follows, embracing him again, even more tenaciously.

			LOLA
	That's not what you came back for.

			NED
	Yes it is.

Impatient, she crushes her mouth against his, kissing him 
hard, desperately clawing at his clothes. She's relentless... 
devouring him with her lips and tongue.

Overwhelmed, he succumbs to her passion. His car keys drop 
from his hand. She pushes him down toward the floor.

LOW ANGLE - AT FLOOR LEVEL

Her hands grasp his shirt, ripping it open. The buttons fly 
in all directions! She grabs at his leather belt, twisting 
it in her hands... ripping it in two!

She grabs his pants by the cuffs... rips one pant leg off! 
Then the other!... tossing them over each shoulder!

Ned and Lola tumble across the floor, arms and legs 
entangled... rolling themselves up in a rug in the process.

ANGLE - FIREPLACE

A roaring fire. We HEAR O.C. MOANING and HEAVY BREATHING. 
The CAMERA TILTS DOWN to a sheepskin rug in front of the 
fireplace. No one is there! A crystal vase falls, CRASHING 
on the stone hearth. The CAMERA TILTS UP to REVEAL Ned and 
Lola... stretched out on the mantle, ravishing each other.

ANGLE - THE REFRIGERATOR

The door suddenly BURSTS OPEN! Ned and Lola tumble out... 
wrapped in each other's arms, food tumbling out with them.

OMIT

Sequence omitted from original script.

ANGLE - THE DINING ROOM TABLE

The table wiggles. The CAMERA MOVES UP to REVEAL Ned and 
Lola kissing passionately. She lays on the table, arms and 
legs stretched upward... a spinning plate balanced on the 
pointed finger of each hand... and a large spinning platter 
balanced on the end of her pointed left toe. Her right foot 
brushes the platter to keep it spinning. The Ed Sullivan 
Show position.

SEVERAL ANGLES - IN BED

-- Ned and Lola's entangled legs, moving under the sheets.

-- Ned sitting, wrists tied to the brass bed with silk 
scarves.

-- Lola, also with her wrists tied to the bed with silk 
scarves.

-- Then... A WIDER ANGLE... revealing that they are BOTH 
tied... at opposite ends of the same bed!

ANGLE - THE BASEMENT STAIRS

Wrapped in each other's arms, they tumble down the stairs... 
crashing into a workbench, still kissing passionately!

ANGLE - A WALL SOCKET

Ned's hand plugs in a cord. RACK FOCUS to a soft lamb's wool 
BUFFER WHEEL rising into frame, WHIRRING. It dips into an 
open can of FLOOR WAX... then moves over to Lola's naked 
body, buffing the surface of her skin to a high gloss. The 
CAMERA MOVES to her EYES. They're CROSSED in ecstasy.

ANGLE - THE BEDROOM FLOOR

HEAVY BREATHING. SQUEAKY BED NOISES. The CAMERA MOVES up 
along the mattress. The bed moves with a jerky rhythm. The 
CAMERA REVEALS Lola's hand, grasping the sheet tightly. WE 
MOVE UP to Lola, lying face down against the pillow.

			LOLA
		(breathless)
	...don't... stop...

FULL SHOT - THE BED

Ned jumps up and down on the bed like a trampoline! Lola is 
on her stomach, bouncing each time Ned's feet hit the bed.

			LOLA
	...Oh Ned... please... don't... 
	stop...

He does a complete BACK FLIP!... then keeps bouncing.

EXT. THE ROOFTOP - NIGHT

The wind blows. THUNDER and LIGHTNING! RAIN pours down.

Ned and Lola, both in yellow rain slickers, ravish each other 
lustfully on the roof, sliding down the incline of shingles. 
Oblivious to the peril, they slip right over the edge!

They hang from the eaves trough, each clutching it with one 
hand while still holding one another with their free arms... 
kissing passionately. The trough breaks! They fall!

ANGLE - THE GROUND BELOW

They roll out of the bushes onto the lawn, arms and legs 
entangled. They fall apart, gasping for breath. A beat.

			LOLA
	That takes care of foreplay.

Ned's eyes widen. Lola grins lustily, rolling on top of him.

INT. PRISON CELL - MORNING

The cell wall is a clutter of PHOTOS: Hitler... Mussolini... 
Charles Manson... and his mother, Mrs. Shady.

A man's muscular naked torso rises into frame, his back to 
us. He's doing pull-ups, his body covered with TATTOOS!

Quotes on each arm... "Don't have a cow, man!" - Bart 
Simpson... and "I know you are, but what am I?" - Pee Wee 
Herman.

On one shoulder, a gravestone with the epitaph "I told you I 
was sick!"

In the center of his back... we see a big tattoo of Ned's 
face labeled "DEAD MEAT."

A GUARD opens the cell door.

			GUARD
	It's time, Max.

The prisoner turns. He's butt-ugly, hard, nasty looking. 
It's MAX SHADY... with a HUGE "Double Corona" CIGAR in his 
mouth. On his chest is a tattoo that reads: THIS SPACE FOR 
RENT. He walks right toward the CAMERA LENS and the FRAME 
goes TO BLACK.

							MATCH CUT TO:

BLACK FRAME

EXT. FEDERAL PRISON - MORNING

Two huge iron doors swing open and a mob of milling REPORTERS 
rushes forward, surrounding Max Shady. He wears a blue suit 
just like Ned's. The Reporters have no microphones, but shove 
their empty hands at Max as if they do. They shout questions.

			REPORTER #1
	Mr. Shady! What's the first thing 
	you're gonna do now that you're out?

			MAX SHADY
	Find Ned Ravine... rip his head off 
	and use it for a bowling ball!

			REPORTER #2
	Are you a good bowler?

			REPORTER #3
	You ever bowled a three-hundred game?

			REPORTER #4
	How would you handle a seven-ten 
	split?

			REPORTER #1
	Say, aren't you wearing one of 
	Ravine's "trademark" blue suits?

			MAX SHADY
	Yeah. The bastard gave it to me as a 
	gift... to make up for losing my 
	case. Now I'm going to wear it to 
	his friggin' funeral!!

Shady sees someone o.s., waves like a gleeful little kid.

			MAX SHADY
	Ma!

INT. LOLA'S HOUSE - MORNING

A ceiling fan rotates slowly... a pair of shorts and a nylon 
stocking hanging from the blades. The house is a wreck!

The CAMERA MOVES DOWN to Ned and Lola, both reclining in a 
big claw-foot bathtub, facing each other, their arms draped 
lazily over the sides. Ned's eyes are closed.

"In-A-Gadda-Da-Vida" plays on the stereo in the b.g.

Lola's hand reaches for an ICE PICK on the floor, raising it 
up slowly. Then... CLICK!... ignites the cigarette lighter 
in the handle, touching the flame to the end of her cigarette.

She chips away a big chunk of ice from the block in a silver 
ice bucket beside her... then sensuously rubs the ice across 
her breasts. Ned winces at the sight of this.

Lola smiles at him, then lets the chunk of ice slide into 
the water... and pushes it between Ned's legs. He cringes, 
eyes crossed. The familiar repetition of MUSICAL notes from 
the stereo DRONES LOUDER... grabbing Ned's attention.

			NED
	That's Madam Butterfly, isn't it?

			LOLA
	Iron Butterfly. In-A-Gadda-Da-Vida.

			NED
		(listening)
	Oh yeah, sure... now I can hear it.

			LOLA
	It tells the sad story of a woman 
	who is rejected by her lover after a 
	brief, but torrid, affair... so she 
	stalks him with an ice pick and stabs 
	him with it more than a thousand 
	times.

			NED
	Really? I never could understand the 
	lyrics.

He lifts his feet out of the water, dangles them over each 
side of the tub. He's still wearing one blue sock. Lola raises 
her feet out of the water. She's still wearing her high heel 
shoes. They are dripping.

			NED
	You know, what happened last night 
	was very, uh...

			LOLA
	Yes... it was. I should check on my 
	homeowners insurance.

			NED
	But we can't ever let it happen again. 
	Ever!

			LOLA
	What are you saying, Ned? That you're 
	rejecting me, your lover, after a 
	brief, but torrid, affair?!

Ned pulls his feet in, sits up... suddenly feeling vulnerable. 
He measures his words very, very carefully.

			NED
	I wouldn't put it exactly like that. 
	It's just that... well, I'm married 
	to a wonderful woman... who is very, 
	very attractive...
		(but adds quickly)
	...not that you aren't very 
	attractive!

His voice begins to ECHO and FADE as the CAMERA MOVES IN to 
a CU of Lola's enraged EYES!

			NED
		(voice echoing)
	...you aren't very attractive... you 
	aren't very attractive... you aren't 
	very attractive...

And then WE SEE...

A CLOSE SHOT of her hand, grasping the ice pick... scratching 
it along the side of the tub, peeling back the porcelain. A 
GRATING SCREECH OVERLAPS to...

INT. PET STORE - DAY

TIGHT on a SCREECHING TROPICAL BIRD. We PULL BACK to reveal 
Ned looking around the store. His ripped pants have been 
temporarily repaired with big pieces of masking tape. A CLERK 
steps over with two big Parrots on her shoulders.

			CLERK
	Don't touch anything. You bond with 
	it... you buy it. Whatdya want?

			NED
	I'd like to buy a pet.

She eyes him suspiciously.

			CLERK
	Yeah. For what purpose?

			NED
	It's a gift... for my wife.

			CLERK
	Right. They all say that.

			NED
	She spends a lot of time alone. I 
	thought it might be nice if she had 
	something to keep her company.

			CLERK
	Yeah. Sure. I bet. How do I know 
	you're not the kind of guy who punches 
	out parakeets? Or takes some poor 
	defenseless animal, throws it in a 
	sack and runs over it with your car 
	five or six times.

			NED
	I would never hurt an animal.

			CLERK
	Boy, I would. They're driving me 
	CRAZY!

Turns and SHOUTS at the noisy birds.

			CLERK
	Shuddup!

They do. She turns back to Ned.

			CLERK
	Okay... tell me more about this broad 
	you're married to. I like to match 
	people with the pets they deserve.

INT. POLICE SQUAD ROOM - DAY

A typical police squad room... smoke-filled, cluttered, busy. 
Arch sits at a desk doing paperwork, surrounded by the Gang 
Members... who are also filling out papers. Arch SINGS to 
himself, munching on nachos from a big pile of chips. The 
Gang Members harmonize with him.

A Gang Member reaches for a nacho chip. Arch grabs for the 
gun in his shoulder holster.

			ARCH
	Uh-uh.

The Gang Member drops the chip. Arch pops it in his mouth, 
continues singing. The Gang Members join in with harmony.

Ned enters in the background, carrying a box with airholes 
in it. He steps over to his desk, looking at the singing 
Gang Members, then motions like a choir leader, cutting them 
off neatly.

			NED
		(doubtful)
	You do all my paperwork?

They all hand over their completed paperwork. Ned stares at 
them for a beat... surprised.

			NED
	Get out of here.

They do. He opens the files... checks out the papers. Arch 
notices something O.S. and gets up.

			ARCH
	And a damn good job, too. One of 'em 
	even did it in Spanish.

Arch turns the sound up on a wall-mounted TV monitor.

			ARCH
	Hey Ned! Catch this! Friend of yours.

On the screen... it's Max Shady speaking to the press.

			MAX (O.S.)
		(on T.V.)
	...I'd like to reach down Ned Ravine's 
	throat and pull out his guts with my 
	bare hands!

			ARCH
		(shocked)
	Jesus... you hear that?

			NED
	He's just working through his anger, 
	trying to find a constructive outlet.

			ARCH
	Are you kiddin'! He'll do it! The 
	guy's a friggin' looney!

			NED
	Trust me, I spent a lot of time with 
	him when I was preparing his case. 
	He's really a very sweet, sensitive 
	human being.

			MAX
		(on T.V.)
	I'd like to mash his head like a 
	ripe melon...

			NED
	He gets a little melon-dramatic.

			MAX
		(on T.V.)
	...then cut off all his fingers and 
	rip out his liver with my teeth!

			NED
		(shrugs)
	See. Loves to exaggerate.

Arch slumps in his chair, really stunned.

			ARCH
	Christ, Ned... you're in deep shit.

Ned laughs it off. He starts checking through the messages 
and paperwork on his desk. The PHONE RINGS. He picks it up.

			NED
	Lieutenant Ravine.

Ned's face darkens. He turns away.

INT. LOLA'S HOUSE - TIGHT SHOT - LOLA'S MOUTH - DAY

Speaking into the phone... intense, obsessive.

			LOLA
	I want to see you, Ned.

INT. POLICE SQUAD ROOM - DAY

			NED
		(whispering harshly)
	I told you not to call me! It's 
	finished between us. No. No, I'm not 
	sucking anything of yours anymore!
		(voice gets louder)
	It's done! OVER!

He SLAMS the receiver down, shattering the phone! Everyone 
stares at Ned in stunned silence.

			NED
		(shrugs it off)
	Wrong number.

INT. LOLA'S HOUSE - DAY

She's in the bathtub, phone receiver in one hand, still 
jabbing at the porcelain tub with the ice pick. Water squirts 
from the holes she's punctured in the side of the tub. She 
flings the ice pick at the wall. It sticks!

EXT. PARK - DAY

Lana is seated on a park bench wearing a trenchcoat, hat and 
sunglasses. Frank walks up, looks around nervously, pretending 
not to know Lana. He sits down next to her.

			FRANK
	How come we gotta meet here?

			LANA
	We have to be careful now. We can't 
	risk being seen together at the house 
	or someone might connect us to the 
	murder later on.

She hands him a hat.

			LANA
	Here... put this on.

She takes her sunglasses off, looks at him. He hesitates, 
staring at the hat. A dignified looking OLDER GENTLEMAN 
approaches. Frank quickly slips the hat on his head.

The Older Gentleman sits on the bench across from them. He 
opens a paper sack and begins neatly laying his lunch out 
next to him. An apple, sandwich, napkin, Mountain Dew.

			LANA
		(whispers to Frank)
	Speak Yiddish.

			FRANK
	What?

			LANA
	Red Yiddish.

We see the SUB-TITLE "Speak Yiddish." From this point on, 
all their dialog is in YIDDISH... but it appears in ENGLISH 
SUB-TITLES across the bottom of the screen.

			FRANK
	Ich hobe getracht, efsher iz der 
	nisht geshtoigen un nisht gefloygen.
		(I been thinkin'... 
			maybe this plan is 
			too complicated.)

			LANA
	Zein nisht azoy meshige! Der plan iz 
	kosher vi yosher.
		(Quit worrying. The 
			plan is perfect.)

INTERCUT - ANGLE ON OLDER GENTLEMAN

He tosses crumbs of his sandwich to the pigeons, occasionally 
glancing up at Frank and Lana. Whenever they speak, however, 
his eyes look down toward their legs.

INTERCUT - MEDIUM TWO-SHOT ON FRANK AND LANA

with SUB-TITLES across the bottom of screen, about knee-level.

			FRANK
	Yo! Ober mir darfen imvarfen in tsug. 
	Un schissen un schtippen in vasser 
	arein. Oy a broch! Mir zenen git 
	bakackt.
		(Yeah, but we gotta 
			get him on the train, 
			shoot him... then 
			push him in the river. 
			There's a million 
			ways we can screw 
			up.)

			LANA
	Vus iz mit idr? Die host a vaichen 
	schmoke?
		(You're not going 
			soft on me, are you?)

			FRANK
	Ven hob ich gehat a vaichen schmoke?
		(When have I ever 
			gone soft on you?)

			LANA
	Lest'n Yomkippur.
		(Last Yom Kippur.)

			FRANK
	Nu shoin, ein mul. Es paseert tsie 
	yeyden man.
		(Okay... once! It 
			happens to every 
			guy.)

He looks around nervously.

			FRANK
	Oy! Mir vellen zein oif groise tsures. 
	Me'vet unz chap'n.
		(We're going to be in 
			big trouble. They're 
			going to catch us.)

			OLDER GENTLEMAN
	There's very little risk involved. 
	Statistics reveal that less than 
	thirty-two percent of all murderers 
	are ever apprehended.

They both look at him... stunned. A long beat.

			LANA
	You speak Yiddish?

			OLDER GENTLEMAN
	No. But I can read sub-titles.

Frank and Lana are speechless. But across the bottom of the 
screen we see a SUB-TITLE reflecting their thoughts.

			SUB-TITLE
	Oy vay!

INT. NED'S LAW OFFICE - DAY

Ned enters, carrying the box. He sets it down on her desk.

			LAURA
	Oh gee, you shouldn't have...

			NED
	I didn't. It's for my wife.

He goes into his office, starts to change out of his tattered 
suit. Laura talks to him from the outer office.

			LAURA
	She called. Wondered why you never 
	came home last night. I told her you 
	were working with a client, 
	undercover.

She steps into the doorway of his office.

			LAURA
	Were you?

			NED
	What?

			LAURA
	There's lipstick on your collar.

She returns to her desk. Disturbed, Ned quickly pulls the 
shirt collar out, checks it.

			NED
	No there isn't.

			LAURA
	No... there isn't. But you answered 
	my question. She's a real looker, 
	huh?

			NED
	Who?

			LAURA
	Lola Cain.

			NED
	I hadn't noticed.

She opens the blinds behind her and looks at Ned through the 
window between their offices.

			LAURA
	Yeah, I noticed how you hadn't 
	noticed.
		(returns to work)
	That's alright. She noticed enough 
	for both of us.

She picks up a stack of papers from the FAX machine. Ned 
steps into the doorway, wearing a clean shirt.

			LAURA
	I worry about you, Ned. I worry a 
	lot.
		(hands him papers)
	Max Shady's been faxing death threats 
	to you all morning.

			NED
		(reading bits)
	...stick a knife in your...
		(reacts, next)
	...rip the eyeballs out of your...
		(next)
	...drive razor-sharp spikes under 
	your...

			LAURA
	Did you get to the one...?

			NED
	...cut it off... shove it in a 
	blender.

			LAURA
	Yeah... that one.

			NED
		(tosses them aside)
	He's just getting it out of his 
	system. Once they say it... they 
	never do it. You know... like the 
	President.

There's a KNOCK at the door. They look up to see an ominous 
SILHOUETTE of a MAN on the milkglass. Ned starts toward the 
door. Laura grabs his arm, stopping him.

			LAURA
		(whispers)
	Wait. It might be him.

She opens her purse, pulls out a big COLT .45, holding it 
out to him. Ned stares at it, taken aback.

			NED
	Where did you get that?

			LAURA
		(as if obvious)
	From my purse.

			NED
	What are you doing with it?

			LAURA
		(still obvious)
	Handing it to you.

			NED
	Jeez, Laura, what do you use a gun 
	for?

			LAURA
	You shoot it. A bullet comes out. 
	Gosh, Ned, after all your years as a 
	cop, I'd think you'd know these 
	things.

			NED
	Laura... put the gun away.

He hands the gun back to her... goes to the door... opens 
it. There's a young DELIVERY MAN holding a bouquet of flowers.

			DELIVERY MAN
		(checks card)
	Flowers for Ned Rav...
		(looks up)
	Hey... aren't you that lawyer guy? 
	Man, you are dead meat!

Ned grabs the flowers, slams the door. Laura takes the 
envelope from the flowers... opens it.

			LAURA
	Is this another sick joke from Max 
	Shady?

She looks at the card... her expression turning cold.

			NED
	What is it...?

			LAURA
		(hands it to him)
	Lola Cain.

She grabs the flowers... takes them into the bathroom.

			LAURA
	I'll put these in water for you.

Ned opens the envelope. An audio cassette drops into his 
hand. Written on the label: PLAY ME.

From the bathroom, we hear the LOUD SOUND of a TOILET 
FLUSHING.

INT. NED'S CAR - NIGHT

It's raining. Ned pops the cassette into the tape player.

			LOLA'S VOICE
	Ned, darling... I know this seems 
	like a strange way to talk with you... 
	but since you won't take my calls, I 
	have no other choice.
		(then suddenly)
	Watch it! That red car's turning 
	left!

Ned swerves to avoid a collision, HONKING his horn.

			LOLA'S VOICE
	I love you, Ned. We're meant to be 
	together... forever.
		(then suddenly)
	The light's changing! Floor it! Go! 
	Go! Go!

Ned guns it!... accelerating through a yellow light.

			LOLA'S VOICE
	Nice move!
		(then sincere again)
	Nothing can keep us apart, Ned. Not 
	even your wife. I'd hate to have to 
	tell her about us, but if necessary... 
	I will.

We see HEADLIGHTS behind Ned's car.

INT. LOLA'S CAR - NIGHT

She is following him, her eyes intense, obsessed. Dizzy sits 
in the back seat, noodling softly on his saxophone.

INT. NED'S HOUSE - NIGHT

Ned steps into the living room carrying the box. Lana comes 
down the stairs, pulling on a bathrobe.

			LANA
	What happened to you last night?

			NED
		(guilty as charged)
	Why? What have you heard?

			LANA
		(sarcastic)
	You could have called. But then, I 
	suppose you were tied up.

			NED
		(reflecting back)
	Only part of the time.

			LANA
	I never know when you're coming home, 
	Ned. How can I ever make any plans?

In the b.g., through the window, WE SEE Frank drop from the 
second floor, right onto the seat of a waiting motorcycle. 
He ZOOMS OFF into the night.

Ned steps up behind Lana, slips his arms around her.

			NED
	I promise I'll spend more time with 
	you. I know it's been rough, being 
	alone so much. But I'll make it up 
	to you. Maybe we should try again, 
	you know... to have a baby.

She rolls her eyes at this... changes the subject.

			LANA
	So what's in the box?

			NED
	Oh... I brought you a present!

He hands it to her. She opens it, looks in. She looks up, 
struggling unsuccessfully to hide a look of displeasure.

			LANA
	What is it?

			NED
	It's... sorta like a cat.

Ned pulls out a PET SKUNK and puts it in Lana's lap. She 
forces a weak smile.

			LANA
	Not enough like a cat.

			NED
	It's a little skunk. I got it at 
	Birds-and-Skunks-R-Us.

EXT. HOUSE - NIGHT

Lola stands in the pouring rain outside, drenched... staring 
at Lana and Ned through the window.

INT. HOUSE - NIGHT

			NED
	So... what're you going to name him?

			LANA
	How about... Ned?

			NED
		(thinks about it)
	Yeah. Got a nice ring to it. I've 
	always liked the name Ned.

			LANA
	No kidding.

He puts his arms around them both.

			NED
	So whatdya think? You love Ned Junior 
	as much as you love me?

			LANA
	At least.

The phone RINGS. Lana stands up, unceremoniously dropping 
the Skunk into Ned's arms. She goes into...

THE ADJOINING ROOM

...to answer the phone.

			LANA
	Hello?... Hello?... Hello?
		(then, whispering)
	Frank? Is that you?

EXT. THE HOUSE - NIGHT

Lola is in a glass telephone booth with venetian blinds and 
a ceiling fan. She cracks the blinds open. In the background, 
through a window, we can see Lana in the house on the phone.

			LANA
		(filtered)
	I told you not to call. Frank? FRANK!

INT. COURTHOUSE - DAY

Ned enters the cavernous marble rotunda, turns down a hallway 
crowded with milling attorneys and defendants. Lola suddenly 
intercepts him... a newspaper trailing from her high heel 
shoe.

			LOLA
	Who's Frank?

			NED
	Frank? The only Frank I know is an 
	auto mechanic... but I sure as hell 
	wouldn't recommend the guy. He's 
	really slow.

He starts to move off, but she stops him, impassioned.

			LOLA
	I had to see you, Ned. I need to 
	feel your arms around me! I wanna 
	suck your toes til the nails pop 
	off!

Lola's voice ECHOES. BYSTANDERS gather, listening. Ned looks 
around self-consciously, embarrassed.

			NED
	I told you, what happened was a big 
	mistake. A one night stand. It's 
	over. I have a wife...

The CROWD presses closer... not missing a thing. A WOMAN 
snaps a FLASH PICTURE! A MAN turns on his video camera.

			LOLA
	It doesn't matter. She'll know all 
	about us soon anyway. I want YOU! In 
	my bed... in my arms... in MEEEEEEE!

Mortified, Ned spins on his heels and makes a bee-line for 
the safety of the Men's Room. Lola holds up two tickets.

			LOLA
	I got us tickets to see Iron 
	Butterfly!

			NED
	I hate opera!

INT. MEN'S ROOM - DAY

Ned bursts in, goes to the urinal... not noticing BEN ARUGULA, 
an older gentleman in a business suit, standing at the urinal 
next to him. A beat later... Lola enters.

			LOLA
	Why are you running from me? Didn't 
	it mean ANYTHING to you?... buffing 
	my buns with carnuba wax?
		(looks down)
	Come on, Neddy-poo. Doesn't Mr. Pokey 
	want to go exploring?

			NED
	He's busy right now.

Arugula glances sideways at Ned, curious and uneasy.

			NED
	Look, I told you... Mr. Pokey made a 
	big mistake! One lousy mistake in 
	his whole stinkin' life! So why don't 
	you give him a BREAK! Besides... he 
	belongs to my wife!

EXT. SHOOTING RANGE - DAY

Lana FIRES her gun rapidly... BANG! BANG! BANG! BANG!... 
over her shoulder, behind her back, under her leg.

ANGLE ON TARGET

A full-body cut-out of a man, wearing one of Ned's trademark 
gray suits. A HUGE SMOKING HOLE has been blown right through 
the crotch! Lana smirks, inhales the SMOKE from the gun 
barrel... and blows it out.

INT. COURTROOM - DAY

TILT DOWN from an official government seal that reads "ARS 
GRATIA ARTIS." JUDGE Ben Arugula... the distinguished looking 
gentleman from the men's room, sits on the bench. Ned, Laura 
and a SLIMY DEFENDANT stand at the defense table.

			JUDGE ARUGULA
	I'd like to congratulate Mr. Pokey 
	for setting yet another unusual legal 
	precedent. This is the first time 
	I've ever tried a case in which the 
	JURY was found to be insane.

ANGLE - JURY AND BAILIFF

The BAILIFF is handing out straitjackets to all the JURORS. 
The Jury Foreman struggles to get his on and laced up.

			BAILIFF
		(to another Juror)
	What're you? A thirty-eight long?

BACK TO JUDGE ARUGULA

			JUDGE ARUGULA
	The jury will be remanded to the 
	Center For Unclear Thinking in Simi 
	Valley. Court's adjourned.

INT. COURTHOUSE HALLWAY - DAY

The JURY is led from the courtroom in straitjackets and 
chains. Ned and Laura follow them out.

			NED
	Your BIRTHDAY! Today? Why didn't you 
	tell me?

			LAURA
	It's not important. I just had one 
	last year.

			NED
	Well, I'm taking you out to celebrate!

In the b.g. the Slimy Defendant pulls a gun and forces 
CITIZENS... including Judge Arugula... up against the wall, 
robbing them!

			LAURA
	Oh no no! It's no big thing. I'll 
	have another one sometime.

			NED
	I insist. And I want to get you a 
	nice present.

			LAURA
	You're so sweet. You don't have to. 
	You gave me a present last year. 
	Those lovely Ginzu knives.

			NED
	Yeah... aren't they great! They last 
	forever. And you can cut right through 
	a shoe with 'em!

As they walk off, we HOLD ON a CLOSE SHOT of a newspaper. 
The headline reads: EX-CON STALKS COP/LAWYER NED RAVINE! 
Below it is a picture of Max Shady, eyes wide with psychotic 
rage... a huge cigar in his mouth, wearing a garish Hawaiian 
shirt.

Hands lower the newspaper... revealing Max himself, with the 
same cigar, shirt and crazed look on his face.

INT. LE MISS FASHION BOUTIQUE - DAY - MONTAGE

Laura models hats... each one becoming more outrageous. She 
coaxes Ned into joining her. They BOTH try on WOMEN's hats... 
smiling and laughing... as "Brown Eyed Girl" plays.

In one of the mirrors, we SEE Max Shady's reflection... as 
he also tries on women's hats, watching them, puffing his 
cigar.

INT. LE HULA BOWL RESTAURANT - NIGHT

Laura wears a baseball cap with beer cans attached to each 
side with long, curved plastic straws. The cap emblem reads 
"BEER BIMBO." A price tag hangs from it. She is beaming.

In the b.g., Hawaiian DANCERS juggle flaming torches as they 
dance around an ICE SCULPTURE of a Hula Dancer.

			NED
	It's nice to be off the streets... 
	away from all the pain and misery 
	out there.

Ned motions casually toward the world "out there"... sticking 
his thumb into the eye of a WAITER who is bending over to 
pick up a spoon, setting off a chaotic CHAIN REACTION of 
small disasters that finally culminates with someone near 
the dance floor bumping into the Torch Juggler, throwing his 
rhythm off.

Distracted, he starts catching the FLAMING ENDS of the 
torches! OW! OH! YI! OUCH! YIPES!

He drops them all. The Waiter who bumped into him, politely 
picks up one of the flaming torches and hands it back to the 
Torch Juggler. He grabs the flaming end of the torch... and 
lets out a SCREAM!

He lunges toward a voluptuous HULA GIRL ICE SCULPTURE, 
grabbing the frozen breasts. His burned hands SIZZLE!

Ned and Laura don't even notice... gazing only at each other.

			LAURA (V.O.)
	What's he thinking when he looks at 
	me with that goofy smile...?

			NED (V.O.)
	Boy, does she look stupid in that 
	hat.

			LAURA (V.O.)
	If I told him how I really feel, 
	he'd probably fire me. What am I 
	saying? He probably doesn't even 
	know I exist.

			NED (V.O.)
	Laura's incredible. And so smart. 
	Smart enough to recognize that Ginzu 
	knives are the gift of a lifetime.
		(then, concerned)
	But she never goes out with guys. I 
	wonder why?

			LAURA (V.O.)
	I guess I'll just have to wait. But 
	he's married. I could wait forever. 
	Than again... maybe Lana will get 
	hit by a runaway truck. There's always 
	a chance that...

			NED (V.O.)
		(interrupting)
	But who cares if she... Oh, sorry.

			LAURA (V.O.)
	That's alright. I was just rambling.

			NED (V.O.)
	Go ahead...

			LAURA (V.O.)
	No, no, really... you first...

			NED (V.O.)
	I insist... please...

			LAURA
	Oh, uh... I just wanted to remind 
	you about...

			NED
	...the Legal Symposium...

			LAURA
	...in Santa Barbara...

			NED
	...tomorrow...

			NED & LAURA
		(in unison)
	..."How To Sue Your Loved Ones."

			NED
	Yeah. I'm driving up in the morning.

ANGLE - MAX SHADY

sits at a corner table wearing a chic beret from the hat 
store, voraciously devouring a huge Hawaiian Pit Roasted 
Pig. He wrenches the apple from the Pig's mouth... takes a 
huge bite!

BACK TO NED AND LAURA

A saxophone begins to wail "Lola's Theme." Ned looks up, his 
eyes drawn to the lounge. He sees...

Lola... striking a sexy pose on a bar stool, eyes locked on 
Ned. Dizzy walks thru, behind the bar, playing his sax.

She grabs a handful of cherries from a glass on the bar, 
shoves them in her mouth, cheeks bulging, tongue moving 
furiously. A moment later, she pulls out a long chain of 
inter-locked cherry stems.

Ned reacts, shaken, glancing nervously at Laura. She smiles, 
unaware. His eyes flash back to Lola.

			LAURA (V.O.)
	He's so cute. He can't even look me 
	in the eye.

Ned's reacts intensely to...

LOLA - NED'S POV

She stretches out sensuously on the bar, executing a series 
of humanly impossible erotic gymnastic positions! Then, 
wrapping her legs around a brass pole, she spins no-handed... 
until her thighs begin to SMOKE!

REVERSE ANGLE - ON ENTIRE ROOM

The eyes of every MALE in the restaurant are riveted on Lola!

CLOSER ON NED AND LAURA

The table starts to rise slowly on Ned's side, glasses sliding 
toward Laura. She reaches out to stop them... noticing Ned's 
distracted expression.

			LAURA
		(touching his arm)
	What is it, Ned? You can tell me.

			NED
		(sighs, reluctant)
	I'm a man, Laura. And all men feel 
	passion at one time or another. Even 
	me.

			LAURA
		(hopeful)
	Really?

			NED
	What would you think of a married 
	man who gave in to those wild, 
	sensual, raging desires?

			LAURA
	Oh... wow... golly...

She gulps, eyes wide. The DRUMS pound faster as the Dancers 
in the b.g. pick up the frenetic tempo!

			NED
	What if, for just one crazy moment, 
	he couldn't resist...? He got knocked 
	for a loop and lost control?

			LAURA
		(smiles, eager)
	Gosh... that might be okay.

Breathless, she breaks a sweat, gasping for air. The DRUMS 
beat LOUDER, FASTER. The b.g. Dancers whip into a frenzy!

			NED
	What if a tidal wave of lust crashed 
	over him and he was sucked into a 
	vortex of wild, thrashing urges?

Both of Laura's ballcap beer cans EXPLODE! Beer SPRAYS out 
in a huge gush, drenching her! Ned is so preoccupied with 
his own dilemma, he doesn't even notice. He heaves a sigh... 
pats her hand... smiles philosophically.

			NED
	Well... it's not your problem. I'll 
	work it out.

ANGLE - AN ICE PICK

grasped tightly in Lola's hand. She walks toward Ned and 
Laura, a seething rage in her eyes.

As she passes the ice sculpture, she stabs the ice pick into 
the crystalline Hula Dancer's neck! The head breaks off. She 
catches it and keeps coming, tossing the head casually in 
one hand, like a basketball.

Lola appears suddenly at Ned and Laura's table. They look 
up.

			LOLA
		(to Laura)
	Like some ice for your drink?

She drops the ice Mermaid head. It shatters Laura's glass to 
bits! Lola turns to Ned with a cold glare.

			LOLA
	Does your wife know you're... 
	"working" late? I certainly hope so, 
	Mr. Ravine.

She lights her cigarette with the ice pick lighter, then 
flips it like a jackknife. It STICKS into Ned's chair, right 
between his legs.

Lola flashes a coldly arrogant smile at Laura... then exits.

EXT. NED'S HOUSE - DRIVEWAY - MORNING

Frank opens the hood to Ned's car, holding a screwdriver in 
one hand... a wrench in the other. He doesn't know where to 
start.

CLOSE ANGLE - MAX SHADY'S FEET - MORNING

A NEWSBOY tosses a folded newspaper. It lands at Max Shady's 
feet. Max picks up the paper, opens it. The headline says: 
SHADY READS NEWSPAPER IN FRONT OF RAVINE RESIDENCE! Max looks 
around self-consciously, eyes shifting uneasily.

INT. NED'S HOUSE - MORNING

Lana stands by the front door. She calls upstairs to Ned.

			LANA
	Hurry up, darling. You'll be late!

Frank slips in, wearing his greasy overalls. He wipes his 
hands on a rag... giving Lana a sly wink.

			FRANK
		(whispering)
	It's all taken care of. When do I 
	knock on the door?

			LANA
	Wait until I signal you. When I raise 
	the blinds... you knock.

She steps over to the blinds and demonstrates. He knocks.

			LANA
	Not now!

			FRANK
	Oh, later... right... okay.

She nods, patronizing. Frank exits. Lana picks up the Skunk, 
cuddling him. Ned comes down wearing his trademark gray suit. 
Lana kisses him passionately... a final farewell.

			LANA
	Drive carefully, sweetheart. Say bye-
	bye to Little Ned. He loves his 
	daddy... don't you Stink Pot?

			NED
		(pets the skunk)
	See you tonight, Junior.

As soon as Ned closes the door, Lana's smile vanishes and 
she casually tosses the Skunk aside with a LOUD CRASH O.C.

EXT. NED'S HOUSE - DRIVEWAY - MORNING

Ned turns the car key. Nothing. He gets out, opens the hood. 
He stares... dumbfounded.

INT. THE HOUSE - MORNING

Ned comes in, visibly upset. Lana acts surprised.

			LANA
	What's wrong?

			NED
	This neighborhood is getting worse 
	all the time! Damn kids stole my 
	engine!

			LANA
	Why don't you catch the train to 
	Santa Barbara? It leaves in twenty 
	minutes.

			NED
	I'll just fly up.

			LANA
	No!

Ned looks at her strangely. She catches herself.

			LANA
	I mean... you can't. Armed terrorists 
	seized the airport this morning. A 
	plane crashed into the tower... and 
	all the runways are on fire!

			NED
	Yeah. So?

			LANA
	And it's fogged in.

			NED
		(disappointed)
	Dammit.

			LANA
	For my peace of mind... take the 
	train.

Lana goes to the window, starts to raise the blinds.

			NED
	I can't do it. You know how I feel 
	about riding trains.

She stops... letting the blinds drop down.

			LANA
	Darling... it's only a short trip.

			NED
		(reconsiders)
	Yeah... right. A short trip.

She starts to raise the blinds again. He picks up the phone.

			NED
		(he hesitates)
	A short trip to hell in a metal tomb!

He slams the receiver down. Lana drops the blinds again...

			LANA
	Just because both your parents died 
	in a train wreck...

			NED
	And my brother, Jeff...

			LANA
	And your brother, Morty...

			NED
	My two sisters...

			LANA
	Right...

			NED
	My best friend, Al... my dog, Woof... 
	Grandma Rose... and Uncle Lionel. 
	All killed by trains!

			LANA
		(very convincing)
	Coincidence, Ned. Beside... that's 
	the past. They're gone.

			NED
		(sighs, resigned)
	Yeah. I guess I can't bring them 
	back by not riding on a train.

			LANA
	That's right.

She starts to raise the blinds again...

			NED
	But I just can't get over this stupid 
	nagging fear that...

She abandons the blinds, leaving them raised part way...

			LANA
	Fear! What about our baby, Ned? I 
	don't want to raise a child in a 
	home filled with fear!

There's a KNOCK at the door. Lana tugs on the cord and the 
blinds drop with a CRASH. The KNOCKING stops. She pretends 
it didn't even happen, racing on.

			LANA
	But if you can conquer your fear... 
	maybe I can conquer my fear of having 
	a baby with a father who's fearful.
		(goes for broke)
	Ned... don't let a train kill our 
	child before it's even conceived!

			NED
		(heaves a sigh)
	I guess you're right.

She grabs the cord, then hesitates...

			LANA
	You're sure now...?

A beat. He nods. She quickly pulls the blinds up.

			NED
	But we'll never make it to the 
	station. By the time a cab gets 
	here...

A LOUD KNOCK at the front door. Lana opens it. It's Frank.

			FRANK
	I was in the neighborhood. Thought 
	I'd stop by and pick up my tools.

			LANA
	Frank will drive you. Won't you Frank?

			FRANK
	Sure, I'll take you to the train 
	station.

They all freeze. Lana glares at Frank, who is completely 
unaware of his faux pas... while Ned tries to figure out why 
that response didn't sound right.

INT. FRANK'S VAN - DAY

They climb into the van. Ned nervously checks his watch.

			NED
	Twelve minutes. We'll never make it.

EXT. FRANK'S VAN - DAY

The CAMERA BOOMS DOWN LOW to reveal Max Shady under the van, 
hanging on like a leech, his back only inches from the road. 
The van drives off.

INT. FRANK'S VAN - MINUTES LATER

At an intersection... they see a "DETOUR" sign. Frank and 
Lana exchange concerned looks. Frank turns the corner. The 
van starts vibrating violently, tossing them around.

			NED
		(checks his watch)
	We're not going to make it.

			FRANK
	We'll make it!

He shifts gears, guns the engine. They rocket ahead, BOUNCING 
WILDLY, their heads THUMPING the car roof! The van SPLASHES 
through deep water, a huge fantail spraying out on both sides.

EXT. TRAIN STATION - DAY

The train is pulling in. The CAMERA PANS to Frank's muddy 
van as it drives up nearby. Frank waits in the van as Ned 
and Lana get out and walk toward the train.

They pass a feeble OLD WOMAN struggling to drag a HUGE STEAMER 
TRUNK along the platform... inches at a time. A REDCAP passes 
her also, carrying a small overnight case for an attractive, 
elegantly attired SOCIALITE. Everyone ignores the Old Woman.

Ned looks nervously at the train, already pale.

			LANA
	Okay... now what're you going to do 
	if you feel queasy going through the 
	tunnel?

			NED
	I'll stand in the vestibule between 
	the cars.

			LANA
	That's right. When you get queasy... 
	go stand in the vestibule between 
	the cars.

She kisses his cheek. He reluctantly boards the train. Her 
smile vanishes.

She hurries back to the next car, nods at Frank, boards the 
train. Frank peels off his coveralls, follows her on.

ANGLE - COACH PLATFORM

Laura's Husband steps from the train, holding the deflated 
Ninja Turtle float ring. He looks around, then walks toward 
the cab stand. The CAMERA MOVES with him, then HOLDS ON...

MAN READING NEWSPAPER - TIGHT SHOT

The headline says: SHADY VOWS BLENDER VENGEANCE ON RAVINE! 
Under the headline is a picture of Max Shady... muddy, bloody, 
greasy, clothes ripped, cigar shredded... looking off.

The paper lowers, revealing Max... a battered mess, looking 
off. He picks up a small violin case and quickly moves toward 
the train as it starts to pull out.

We now SEE that the seat of Max's pants has been ripped out, 
his naked buttocks scratched and scraped raw by the road.

INT. SECOND COACH CAR - DAY

Ned stares out the window... apprehensive, nervous.

Frank and Lana enter at the opposite end of the coach. They 
spot Ned, quickly ducking into a seat where they can observe 
him yet remain hidden from view behind the tall seatbacks.

INT. FIRST COACH CAR - DAY

Max walks through the car looking for Ned. He pauses, puffing 
on his big cigar. A WOMAN PASSENGER looks up and is shocked 
to see Max's scraped bare butt hanging out only inches away.

			WOMAN PASSENGER
	OH! My dear gracious!

Max swivels around to look at her... turning his bare behind 
toward an IRRITABLE MAN across the aisle.

			IRRITABLE MAN
	SIR! Would you PLEASE extinguish 
	that foul smelling cigar?

			MAX
		(turning slowly)
	You want me to put out my CIGAR? YOU 
	want me to put out my cigar? You 
	want ME to put out my CIGAR?

			IRRITABLE MAN
	Yeah.

			MAX
	Certainly.

INT. SECOND COACH CAR - DAY

Max enters through the vestibule, without his cigar, stopping 
in his tracks when he sees Ned. He smiles to himself, then 
ducks back into the lavatory.

INT. LAVATORY - DAY

Max looks at himself in the mirror. He's a disaster. He opens 
the violin case, pulling out his trademark "Ned Ravine" gray 
suit on a hangar. It's not even wrinkled.

INT. SECOND COACH CAR - DAY

Ned looks pale... sweating... reacting tensely to every lurch 
and bump the train makes. The feeble Old Woman strains to 
pull her huge steamer trunk down the aisle, inch by inch, 
toward Ned.

ANGLE ON FRANK AND LANA

Lana peers over the seat, watching Ned with a cruel smile.

			LANA
	It's already getting to him. He'll 
	be out of that seat and into the 
	vestibule within ten minutes... I 
	guarantee it.

INT. LAVATORY - DAY

Max is cleaned up, dressed in the suit. He straightens his 
tie, slicks his greasy hair back, sticks a big cigar in his 
mouth and grins at himself in the mirror.

			MAX
	You talkin' to me? You talkin' to 
	ME? You... talkin'... to... ME?

He reaches into the violin case, pulls out a complex 
assortment of metal parts, assembling them swiftly. CLICK... 
SNAP... CLUNK! It's an incredibly nasty looking high-tech, 
automatic weapon with gigantic cartridge clip.

He screws on a long silencer and points the gun at the 
ceiling. POOF!... a muffled gunshot! Debris fall around him. 
He looks up. He has blown a HOLE through the roof of the 
coach.

He adjusts the Silencer Volume Control, which has a scale 
from 1 thru 11. He turns it all the way down to "0"... DEAD 
SILENT. He pulls the trigger. The gun RECOILS, but there is 
absolutely NO SOUND! He has blown another HOLE in the ceiling.

INT. SECOND COACH CAR - DAY

Ned looks across the aisle to see a GROSS SLOB pulling all 
kinds of strange food items from a paper bag, making a big, 
sloppy, disgusting SANDWICH that squirts and drips all over. 
Ned turns away... really queasy now.

INT. LAVATORY - DAY

Max reaches into the case, pulls out A BLENDER! He plugs it 
into the outlet and REVS it a couple times, grinning wickedly.

INT. SECOND COACH CAR - DAY

Max steps out of the lavatory and sees the CONDUCTOR coming 
his way collecting tickets. He quickly spins around, slides 
the door open and steps into the vestibule between cars.

The Conductor can't get past the Old Woman, so he climbs 
over the top of her trunk, with no thought of helping her.

INT. VESTIBULE - DAY

Max looks out the side window, trying to conceal the weapon 
in front of him. The Conductor enters, sees him.

			CONDUCTOR
	Ticket?

Without turning, Max holds the ticket up over his shoulder. 
The Conductor takes it, punches it, notices the gun barrel.

			CONDUCTOR
	Sorry pal... automatic weapons are 
	only allowed in the club car after 
	nine p.m.

Max turns, raising the gun with a nasty GROWL. The Conductor 
casually snaps a baggage tag to the barrel, taking the gun.

			CONDUCTOR
	I'll check it with baggage. You can 
	claim it at the depot in Santa 
	Barbara.

The Conductor drops the weapon into a big mesh bag... along 
with a dozen other guns he's collected. He exits. Max whirls 
around facing the window, eyes filled with rage. Now what?

INT. SECOND COACH CAR - DAY

A gun barrel slowly protrudes between the seats in front of 
Frank and Lana. Their eyes widen. Suddenly, a stream of water 
hits Frank in the face! He sputters. A LITTLE KID named JEFF 
scrambles into the aisle.

			JEFF
	Hi! I'm Jeff and I'm eight years 
	old. Didja know if ya put a penny on 
	the track it'll make the train crash? 
	No kiddin'! You ever been in a wreck? 
	My uncle has. Lotsa times. It's really 
	neat. Everybody gets creamed! All 
	bloody guts... heads ripped off and 
	stuff... Hey... wanna hear my song 
	"Great Green Gobs of Greasy Grimy 
	Gopher Guts"?

Lana turns to Frank... inspired. She leans toward Jeff.

			LANA
	You want to earn a couple bucks, 
	kid?

ANGLE ON NED

Jeff bounces into the seat across from Ned.

			JEFF
	Hi! I'm Jeff and I'm eight years 
	old. Didja know if ya put a penny on 
	the track it'll make the train crash?

ANGLE ON FRANK AND LANA

Lana peers over the seat at Ned. She smiles.

			LANA
	He's losing it. You better get up to 
	the next car. Remember, give me the 
	high sign as soon as you see the 
	river. It'll be two minutes and nine 
	seconds past the tunnel. I'll take 
	care of the rest. Anything goes 
	wrong... just make sure you back me 
	up.
		(grabs his collar)
	And don't let him see you.

Frank gets up, moves down the aisle slowly, eyes on Ned. He 
can't squeeze past the Old Woman, who is still struggling to 
pull her huge trunk down aisle. So... he climbs right over 
the top of it... oblivious to her.

Frank stares at Ned warily as he gets closer. Suddenly, Jeff 
squirts a stream of water in Ned's eyes. Frank sees his 
chance, rushing past Ned toward the vestibule.

INT. VESTIBULE - DAY

Frank races through the vestibule behind Max's back. By the 
time Max turns to see who's there... Frank is gone.

INT. SECOND COACH CAR - DAY

Ned wipes the water from his eyes, blinking. He grabs the 
squirt gun away from Jeff, holding it up angrily.

			NED
	This... is not a toy!

			JEFF
	Yes it is.

A beat. Ned realizes he's right. Acting tough, he pulls the 
plug and drains the water out of the gun, then tosses it 
back to Jeff.

Without missing a beat, Jeff drops the empty water magazine 
from the grip and jams a full one in... just like loading a 
cartridge clip. He smirks, ready for action.

In the aisle next to them, the Old Woman now pulls her trunk 
back toward the vestibule. Jeff points the squirt gun at 
her. Suddenly, she whips around and SQUIRTS HIM in the face 
with her own squirt gun! He sputters!

INT. VESTIBULE - DAY

Max stares out the window, still seething. Behind him, the 
Old Woman moves into the vestibule, inch by inch, trying to 
drag her trunk into the first coach car.

Max turns, sees her struggling and goes to her aid.

			MAX
	Here... let me help you with that.

He pushes the trunk into the first coach car, then very 
politely holds the door open for her. She smiles sweetly at 
him as she shuffles through.

			OLD WOMAN
	What a nice young man. You are so 
	polite.

			MAX
		(smiles)
	I try to be.

INT. SECOND COACH CAR - DAY

Jeff is SINGING to Ned... to the tune of "The Old Gray Mare."

			JEFF
	Great green gobs of greasy, grimy 
	gopher guts... mutilated monkey 
	meat... chopped up dirty birdie's 
	feet... one pint jar of all-purpose 
	porpoise pus... cooked in a Mulligan 
	stew.

Ned turns queasy. The train lurches. He stiffens.

INT. FIRST COACH CAR - DAY

The Old Woman has unpacked her huge trunk. She has hung up 
clothes... set out a vase with flowers... hung up a big framed 
painting... and turned on a floor lamp. She pulls out a set 
of dumbbells, pumps them a couple times... and drops them on 
the floor with a loud CLUNK!

Frank watches her from his seat across the aisle with a blank 
expression... only his eyes moving.

The Conductor punches the Old Woman's ticket, then holds out 
his hand, waiting. She pulls out a Smith & Wesson .44 
Magnum... drops it in his bag. He waits. She pulls out an 
Uzi.

EXT. THE TRACKS AHEAD - MOVING SHOT - DAY

Up ahead, we see a tunnel approaching.

OMIT

Sequence omitted from original script.

INT. SECOND COACH CAR - DAY

			JEFF
		(still singing)
	French fried eyeballs and ugly scabs 
	you wanna pick... stuff to make your 
	mother sick... dog poop on a stick... 
	puke and snot all mixed together in 
	a pot...

Ned is looking very pale and queasy. Suddenly, Jeff jumps 
up... presses his face against the window.

			JEFF
	Oh boy! Here comes the tunnel!

Ned can't take it anymore. He gets up, pale and sweating.

EXT. TRACKS AHEAD - MOVING SHOT - DAY

...racing toward the tunnel!

INT. SECOND COACH CAR - DAY

Lana sees Ned stumble shakily into the aisle, moving toward 
the vestibule.

			LANA
	Way to go, Ned. Right on time.

The train enters the TUNNEL. Everything goes PITCH BLACK. A 
few beats, then... LIGHT fills the car again as they emerge 
from the tunnel. Lana looks. Ned is gone! She heads down the 
aisle.

INT. FIRST COACH CAR - DAY

The Conductor is still tagging weapons as the Old Woman comes 
up with a Ruger Mini 14 machine gun, a Mauser C96 automatic 
handgun, a sawed-off double-barreled .12 gauge shotgun... 
and an old wooden slingshot.

INT. SECOND COACH CAR - DAY

Lana looks through the small window into the vestibule and 
catches a glimpse of a gray suit. She ducks back, leaning 
against the lavatory door.

INT. LAVATORY - THE MIRROR - DAY

Ned's dripping face rises up from the sink into view. He 
splashes more water on, trying to overcome his queasiness.

INT. SECOND COACH CAR - DAY

Lana reaches into her purse, pulls out a gun. She looks 
through the vestibule windows into the first coach car, her 
eyes searching for Frank.

INT. FIRST COACH CAR - LANA'S POV - DAY

Frank pokes his head out into the aisle, looking toward Lana. 
He waves at her.

INT. SECOND COACH CAR - DAY

Lana ducks back, pressing herself against the lavatory door... 
gripping the gun, tense.

INT. LAVATORY - DAY

Ned starts to open the door, then stops. He notices the violin 
case. Opens it. A couple of bullets roll around inside. Then, 
he sees the blender... puzzled.

INT. SECOND COACH CAR - DAY

Lana leans forward, looking through the vestibule windows, 
watching desperately for Frank's signal.

INT. FIRST COACH CAR - DAY

Frank looks out the window and sees...

EXT. THE RIVER - FRANK'S POV

It looms ahead.

INT. SECOND COACH CAR - DAY

Lana sees Frank's frantic signal. She raises the gun, pulls 
the hammer back and steps quickly into...

INT. THE VESTIBULE - DAY

Max hears someone enter. He stiffens...

INT. SECOND COACH CAR - DAY

Ned steps out of the lavatory.

INT. VESTIBULE - DAY

Lana FIRES!... blowing a hole right through Max and the window 
behind him! She keeps firing! BLAM! BLAM! BLAM! BLAM! BLAM! 
BLAM! More bullets than the gun could ever possibly hold!

INT. SECOND COACH CAR - DAY

Ned hears the GUNSHOTS and whirls around, looking into the 
vestibule through the glass window, just as...

INT. VESTIBLE - DAY

...Max turns to face Lana, filled with bloody bullet holes.

			MAX
	You shootin' at me?

Shocked to see it's Max, Lana empties the rest of the bullets 
into him... BLAM! BLAM! BLAM! BLAM! Max is SLAMMED back into 
the vestibule door by the impact!

			MAX
	Yeah... you're definitely shootin' 
	at me.

She fires one last shot... BLAM!!!

EXT. TRAIN ON BRIDGE - DAY

Max flies out the door, executing a perfect "full gainer 
with a triple twist and a half-tuck"... a flawless Olympic 
style dive... ending with a dead body "belly flop" into the 
water!

INT. FIRST COACH CAR - DAY

Frank sees Max hit the river and lets out a loud "WHOOP!" 
The Old Woman shoots him a nasty look. He stifles himself.

INT. VESTIBULE - DAY

Ned slides the vestibule door open... steps toward Lana. In 
a daze, she raises the gun, points it at him, pulling the 
trigger... CLICK... CLICK... CLICK. He takes the gun from 
her gently.

INT. FIRST COACH CAR - DAY

Frank jumps up, rushing forward. He skids to a stop... seeing 
Ned through the glass! Shocked, he ducks back.

INT. VESTIBULE - DAY

			NED
	In this crazy world, there's not a 
	whole lot a guy can count on. But 
	when the chips are down, I can always 
	count on you.

He takes her hand gently and kisses it...

			NED
	You risked your life to save mine. A 
	guy can't ask any more from a woman 
	than that.

... then, CLICK! He snaps a handcuff on her wrist!

			NED
	But I saw you shoot him, Lana. In 
	cold blood. I gotta arrest you for 
	murder.

			LANA
	Ned... you wouldn't...

			NED
	Sorry. I'm a cop. I have a job to 
	do.

			LANA
	But... you said it yourself. I saved 
	your life.

			NED
	Don't worry, baby. I know a good 
	lawyer.

SPINNING NEWSPAPER

whirls at us, snapping to a stop in someone's hands... upside 
down. The hands turn it rightside up. The headline reads:

"COP ARRESTS WIFE FOR MURDER!... WILL DEFEND HER IN COURT!"

REVERSE ANGLE

The paper lowers, revealing Lola Cain with a gratified smile.

EXT. CITY JAIL - DAY

Ned and Laura move up the steps, surrounded by REPORTERS and 
MEDIA PEOPLE. Questions are being fired from all sides.

			REPORTER #1
	What kind of gun did she use?

			NED
	That's a question for the arresting 
	officer.

			REPORTER #2
	Aren't you the arresting officer?

			NED
	You'll have to ask her attorney.

			REPORTER #1
	But aren't you her attorney?

			NED
	Only her husband can answer that.

			REPORTER #3
	What will Mrs. Ravine be wearing at 
	the trial?

Ned stops at the top of the stairs, turning to the Reporters.

			NED
	A lovely powder blue dress with a 
	cinch waist, full bodice and a 
	delicately pleated skirt.

			REPORTER #3
	Does it have a matching jacket?

			NED
	No comment.

			REPORTER #3
	Is it cotton or rayon?

			NED
		(perturbed)
	I said... NO COMMENT!

Ned and Laura turn and enter the building.

			REPORTER #1
		(calling out)
	Did she eat any of the victim's body 
	parts?

INT. CITY JAIL BUILDING - ENTRY CORRIDOR - DAY

			NED
	Jeez... they're really throwing some 
	tough questions out there today.

			LAURA
	They're just doing their job.

			NED
	Yeah... well I call it a "high-tech 
	lynching of an uppity white 
	housewife."

INT. CAVERNOUS ROOM - DAY

It's huge, dark and shadowy. More than a dozen heavily armed 
POLICE OFFICERS stand guard all around the perimeter. In the 
center is a cell constructed of iron bars, like an animal 
cage. Ned and Laura enter. Arch steps over.

			NED
		(seeing the cage)
	What's this?

			ARCH
	Only cell available. They had that 
	serial killer locked up here... you 
	know, the one who talks his victims 
	to death then eats them... Hannibal 
	the Lecturer. But they let him out 
	for a three week tour to publicize 
	his new book.

Arch hands him a hardbound book.

			NED
		(reading the cover)
	"To Serve Man."

			ARCH
	It's a cookbook.

Ned flips it over.

ANGLE - THE BOOK - NED'S POV

On the back is a picture of HANNIBAL THE LECTURER... wearing 
a baseball catcher's mask with barbed wire over the mouth.

BACK TO SCENE

			ARCH
	And look, look... he autographed it.

Arch pulls the front cover of the book open, pointing.

			NED
		(reads it)
	To Arch... Love to have you for dinner 
	sometime... Hannibal.
		(hands it back)
	Very nice.

Arch points toward the cage.

			ARCH
	They're waiting for ya. They didn't 
	want to start without her attorney 
	being present.

CLOSE ON LANA - CANTED ANGLE

There's a BIG MOTH on her mouth. The CAMERA PULLS BACK SLOWLY. 
A beat... she spits the moth off, irritated.

			LANA
	PFFFTT! Damn moths! This place could 
	use a good exterminator.

Three POLICE INVESTIGATORS sit opposite Lana at a long table. 
Moths flutter everywhere.

			INVESTIGATOR # 2
		(to Police Guard)
	Let's get the SWAT Team in here.

Ned, Laura and Arch enter the cage as the Guard exits.

			LANA
	Can't you get me out of this cage, 
	Ned? I'm goin' buggy in here.

			NED
	Judge said no bail. Don't worry. 
	Just tell the truth, you'll be fine.

He turns to the Investigators.

			NED
	Who's gonna handle the interrogation?

			INVESTIGATOR 1
	It's your collar... your bust... 
	your call... your show... your play... 
	your move... your wife...

			NED
	Okay, okay!... I'll handle it.

Laura sits at the far end of the table and opens her notebook. 
Lana pulls out her mirrored compact, starts to apply lipstick.

			INVESTIGATOR 2
	Sorry Mrs. Ravine... there's no makeup 
	allowed in this building.

He nods toward a warning sign: a circle around a LIPSTICK 
with a diagonal line thru it. She responds, cool, confident.

			LANA
	What're you gonna do... arrest me 
	for primping?

In the b.g., members of the SWAT Team desperately swat at 
the fluttering moths.

Ned spins his chair around, plants one foot on it, leans on 
his knee, looking hard at Lana.

			NED
	Don't give us a tough time. Just 
	spill it! What were you doing on 
	that train?

			LANA
	Well...

Ned raises his hand, sits down, leans close, changing his 
tone.

			NED
		(confidential)
	As your attorney, I must advise you... 
	you don't have to answer that 
	question.

Ned stands, paces, agitated... plants his foot on the chair 
again. He leans toward her... getting tough again.

			NED
	Alright, quit playing games with us!
		(fires questions)
	Who put ya up to it? Where'd you get 
	the gun? What's your link with the 
	CIA?

			LANA
	I...

Ned jumps in, motioning with his hands for this to stop.

			NED
	Whoa whoa whoa whoa! That's it! I 
	will not tolerate this unwarranted 
	badgering of my client. She'll have 
	her day in court, gentlemen.

He slams his briefcase shut and turns to Lana, sincere.

			NED
	I want to thank you, Mrs. Ravine, 
	for being so cooperative with these 
	gentlemen.
		(turns to Laura)
	Did you get all that down, Laura. 
	Every word she said?

			LAURA
	Yep. Both of 'em.

EXT. NED'S HOUSE - BACKYARD - DAY

The CAMERA MOVES IN to a wire mesh cage at the very back of 
the yard. A small sign on it says: NED JUNIOR. The door is 
open. The cage is... empty!

EXT. AMUSEMENT PARK - DAY

Lola rides the roller coaster with Lana's pet Skunk. She 
LAUGHS maniacally as they plunge down a steep grade!

The Skunk stands stiffly on her lap, his paws planted on the 
guard rail, eyes bulging out!... his fur standing straight 
up!

INT. NED'S HOUSE - DAY

Ned hesitates at the front door. It's open a crack. He moves 
inside cautiously. There is a strange BUBBLING SOUND coming 
from the kitchen. He moves toward it... apprehensive.

He enters the kitchen and SEES... a huge bubbling pot on the 
stove, foam spilling over from under the lid! His mind reels! 
He charges out the back door.

EXT. BACK OF HOUSE - DAY

Ned bursts out the back door... CAMERA TRACKING with his 
feet as he dashes across the huge back yard... MUSIC POUNDING!

He SEES the EMPTY animal cage! The door is open. A fuzzy 
blanket hangs halfway out.

Shocked, Ned spins around... running back toward the house... 
CAMERA TRACKING HIS FEET, struggling to keep up. The CAMERA 
SLAMS into a tree!... CRACKING the LENS!

INT. NED'S HOUSE - THE KITCHEN - DAY

Ned bursts in... SEES the bubbling pot!... a huge butcher 
knife on the counter!... and LOLA, arms outstretched to greet 
him.

			NED
	NO!

			LOLA
	Yes.

			NED
	NOOOOO!

			LOLA
	Yes!

			NED
	NOOOOOOOooooooo!!!

She whips the cover off the bubbling pot.

			LOLA
	YES! Cappelini pomodoro!

			NED
	What?

She lifts up pasta with a spaghetti spoon... tossing a sprig 
of basil into the pot from the basil-leaf crown she wears.

			LOLA
	Pasta with tomato sauce. Whatsa matta? 
	You don't like Italian?

			NED
	Where's Ned Junior? WHERE IS HE?!

			LOLA
	I thought he might like to get out, 
	so I took him to the amusement park.

He grabs Lola's arm and drags her toward the front door.

			NED
	You can't just break into my house, 
	cook my food... borrow my skunk!
		(opens the door)
	Leave me alone. Stay out of my face! 
	Out of my neighborhood! Out of my 
	LIFE!

She steps outside... turns to him.

			LOLA
	You haven't seen the last of me, 
	Ned.

He SLAMS the door in her face... hesitates a beat, curious... 
then pulls the door open. Lola's still there.

			LOLA
	I told you.

Ned SLAMS the door again.

EXT. COURTHOUSE STEPS - DAY

It's a media circus! Vendors sell "TRIAL BALLOON" balloons.

PRESS PHOTOGRAPHERS cluster around a squad of CHEERLEADERS 
wearing sweaters emblazoned with "FREE LANA OR BUST!" across 
their chests.

They perform a rousing CHEER in front of a sign on the 
building that reads... "LE COURTHOUSE".

			CHEERLEADERS
		(with choreography)
	Lana, Lana, she's the one Shot a bad 
	guy with a gun Blew that sucker off 
	a train Some guys are a friggin' 
	pain YaaaaaAAAAAAAAY LANA!

A BBC COMMENTATOR speaks to a TV camera.

			COMMENTATOR
	Once again, Americans are making a 
	mockery of their courts, turning a 
	murder trial into a media circus! 
	How can justice ever prevail when it 
	is ridiculed and reviled in such a 
	heinously revolting manner? This is 
	Clement Von Franckenstein returning 
	you to our BBC studios in London for 
	the latest photographs of Lady Di 
	naked in the bath.

Ned and Laura push their way through the crush of REPORTERS.

INT. COURTROOM - DAY

Spectators pour through several turnstiles, shoving in their 
tokens. TV cameras have been set up to broadcast the trial.

A UNIFORMED THEATER USHER escorts JURY MEMBERS in, checks 
their tickets, hands them programs and directs them to their 
seats.

Ned and Laura sit at the defense table, next to Lana... who 
is oblivious to everything, deeply engrossed in a pocket 
video game. Ned looks toward the gallery and does a disturbed 
take.

It's Lola!... sitting in the back row wearing a tailored 
suit, large brimmed hat with dark veil... and a SKUNK SKIN 
STOLE draped around her shoulders!

Dizzy sits next to her, playing softly on a MUTED SAX.

ANGLE - BROADCAST BOOTH

A SPORTSCASTER delivers play-by-play of the action.

			SPORTSCASTER
	What a great day for a trial! We 
	have lots of incandescent lighting, 
	seventy-two degrees inside... and no 
	wind!

ANGLE - COURTROOM

			BAILIFF
	Oy vay! Oy vay! Superior Court of 
	Los Angeles is now in session. And 
	here he is... direct from a triumphant 
	one-week engagement in Las Vegas 
	Circuit Court... the honorable... 
	the venerable... the totally 
	irrepressible... Judge Harlan Skan-
	kyyyyyyy!

Flashing "APPLAUSE" signs and flashing "ALL RISE" audience 
prompters. Everyone gives the Judge a standing ovation.

ANGLE - BROADCAST BOOTH

			SPORTSCASTER
	Wow... has this defense team been 
	HOT! Thirty-seven straight victories 
	this year! Let's go down for the 
	coin toss.

ANGLE - COURTROOM

The Bailiff flips a coin, motions to the PROSECUTOR.

			SPORTSCASTER (V.O.)
	The Prosecution wins the flip of the 
	coin and elects to kick things off.

INT. COURTROOM - LATER

The PROSECUTOR delivers her impassioned opening statement.

			PROSECUTOR
	...the prosecution will prove that 
	this repulsive and degenerate woman 
	coldly murdered a decent, law-abiding 
	citizen...

			NED
		(jumps up)
	Objection! Move to strike. Hearsay, 
	irrelevant, stupid, idiotic, caca-
	doody poo-poo...

			JUDGE SKANKY
	Sustained.

INT. COURTROOM - LATER

Laura is on the stand. Ned hands her a sheet of paper.

			NED
	And can you tell us what this is?

			LAURA
	Yes. It's a death threat that Max 
	Shady FAXED to you on the day he was 
	released from prison.

Ned snatches it back, pacing, folding it into a paper 
airplane.

			NED
	A FAX in which he threatened to puree 
	certain parts of my anatomy in a 
	blender! I'd like to submit this 
	into evidence.

			PROSECUTOR
		(jumps up)
	Objection! Who cares about the FAX 
	in this case?

			JUDGE SKANKY
	I'll allow it.

Ned sails the paper plane toward the COURT CLERK, who is at 
an evidence table already piled high with tagged guns, 
appliances, knickknacks, auto parts and other junk.

The plane sails toward an open window. The Clerk grabs it... 
going OUT the window with the plane!

EXT. COURTHOUSE LAWN - DAY

The Cheerleaders lead the SPECTATORS in an exuberant CHEER.

			CHEERLEADERS
	U-G-L-Y! You ain't got no alibi! 
	You're ugly! Yeah, you're ugly! M-A-
	M-A! How you think you got that way? 
	Your Mama! Yeah, your Mama!

In the b.g., the Court Clerk plummets to the ground, then 
staggers to his feet, and stumbles... dazed... back toward 
the courthouse.

INT. COURTROOM - LATER

One of the JURORS watches a "DICK VAN DYKE" re-run on a small 
portable TV monitors, oblivious to the testimony. In the 
b.g., the battered Clerk stumbles back in with the paper 
plane. The Conductor is on the stand. Ned holds up a BLENDER.

			NED
	And is this the blender you found in 
	the lavatory of the train?

			CONDUCTOR
	Yes... it is.

			NED
	I'd like this marked as evidence.

The Bailiff reaches out, Ned waves him off... instead, tossing 
the blender over several heads to the Court Clerk... who 
runs to catch it, CRASHING into the wall. The blender falls, 
SHATTERS.

ANGLE - BROADCAST BOOTH

			SPORTSCASTER
	Awwwww... a bad call by Ravine. Let's 
	check out the re-play.

On the RE-PLAY SCREEN we see the action repeated in SLOW 
MOTION as the Sportscaster draws lines, circles, x's and 
squiggles.

			SPORTSCASTER
	Look at THAT! The Bailiff is wide 
	open! But instead of handing it off, 
	Ravine goes for the long bomb. Ohhhh! 
	The pass is wide! A real wobbler! 
	There's no way! He scrambles, but he 
	just can't get his hands on it... 
	And RIGHT THERE!...
		(freezes the frame)
	...WHAM! That blender is gone!

INT. COURTROOM - LATER

At the defense table, Laura glances over at Lana, who is 
casually browsing through a copy of GALS & GUNS magazine. 
Laura reacts, then, trying to be as diplomatic as possible...

			LAURA
	Ned... did you ever consider that 
	maybe you don't know women as well 
	as you think you do?

			PROSECUTOR (O.S.)
	Now would you tell the court, in 
	your own words, what you said to Mr. 
	Ravine?

They both look toward the witness stand. Ned is shaken.

			NED
		(whispers)
	I'm really worried about this guy. 
	He could blow our whole case right 
	out of the water.

ANGLE - WITNESS STAND - MOMENTS LATER

Jeff, the little boy from the train is on the witness stand. 
The Prosecutor stands by, listening as...

			JEFF
		(singing)
	Great green gobs of greasy grimy 
	gopher guts... mutilated monkey 
	meat... itsy-bitsy birdie feet... 
	Great green gobs of greasy grimy 
	gopher guts... and me without a spoon!

The JURORS turn pale and reach for the air sickness bags in 
front of them. The Courtroom erupts. The Judge pounds his 
gavel LOUDLY.

			JEFF
		(pointing at Lana)
	That lady paid me two bucks to sing 
	it to him...!

But NO ONE hears this in all the confusion. The Judge, also 
looking ill now, bangs his gavel again.

			JUDGE SKANKY
	Recess! Ten minutes!

EXT. PLAYGROUND - DAY

The Judge, Jury, Attorneys and Spectators are all playing on 
the swings, teeter-totters, monkey bars... having a blast! 
Ned and the Prosecutor play "dodge-ball." Laura cheers Ned 
on. The Prosecutor rockets the ball at Ned... and just misses!

			PROSECUTOR
	Gotcha, dork face! Gotcha, gotcha!

			LAURA
	No you didn't!

			NED
	No way! Uh-uh! Missed by a mile!

The BAILIFF steps into CLOSE UP, blowing a whistle loudly!

			BAILIFF
	Recess is over! Let's go... move it, 
	move it, move it!

INT. BROADCAST BOOTH - LATER

Marching band MUSIC fades off-screen.

			SPORTSCASTER
	There they go... the UCLA Marching 
	Band! And now... Holy Toledo!... it 
	looks like the victim's mother... 
	Helen Shady... is gonna take the 
	stand! This will be the first 
	defensive play of the afternoon.

INT. COURTROOM - SAME TIME

Mrs. Shady is on the stand. Ned paces.

			NED
	Mrs. Shady... would you tell us about 
	your son, Max. Was he a... a good 
	boy?

			MRS. SHADY
	He was the best. And that's not just 
	a mother talking. You can ask anybody.

			NED
	But he got into trouble once in 
	awhile... like all kids do?

			MRS. SHADY
	Well, you know, pranks. Little jokes 
	and things. But he was so cute. I 
	have pictures!

She reaches down into her huge purse, pulling out a photo 
album. She opens it, showing Ned.

			MRS. SHADY
	Here. This is when he set the cat on 
	fire...
		(then, assuring him)
	Oh... but the cat deserved it.

			NED
		(looks, points)
	And what, uh... what are these...?

			MRS. SHADY
	Marshmallows. He just loved to toast 
	marshmallows over a roaring cat. 
	Burned on the outside... all soft in 
	the middle.
		(turns page)
	And right here... this was taken on 
	the day he left the priesthood to 
	join the Green Berets.

ANGLE - THE JURY

They rise slowly out of their seats, craning their necks, 
trying to see the photos.

BACK TO SCENE

Ned is now seated next to Mrs. Shady in the witness box, 
looking at the photo album with her. Judge Skanky peers over 
the side of the bench.

			NED
	This is cute.

			MRS. SHADY
		(laughs, delighted)
	Oh yes! That was during his Ku Klux 
	Klan phase. He would take the sheets 
	right off my bed... cut those little 
	holes in them. What a stitch he was!

ANGLE - THE SPECTATORS

are now on their feet, all straining to catch a glimpse of 
the photos in the album.

BACK TO SCENE

			NED
	And is this Max... with all the 
	tools... fixing his bike?

She snatches the photo out of the album.

			MRS. SHADY
	Why that shouldn't even be in there! 
	It's his rotten little half-brother.
		(rips up photo)
	Stinkin' little pecker... he never 
	was any good...

ANGLE - BROADCAST BOOTH

The Sportscaster is pushing his face against the broadcast 
booth glass, trying to see what everyone's looking at.

BACK TO SCENE

			MRS. SHADY
		(points at another)
	Oh! I didn't like these neo-Nazi 
	boys. They were all so fussy and 
	persnickety about everything. Heil 
	this and heil that.
		(flips the page)
	Oh look... here's Max with his 
	chainsaw. He loved to go to the 
	national park and cut down those 
	giant old trees. It made him feel so 
	patriotic. You know, if he hadn't 
	been such a successful criminal... I 
	think he would have been a lumberjack.

The Court Clerk, Bailiff and Court Recorder have all moved 
around behind the witness stand, peering over Mrs. Shady's 
shoulder at the photos.

			MRS. SHADY
		(tearful, angry)
	But now he'll never be anything! Not 
	since...
		(stands up, points)
	...that woman, your wife, pulled the 
	trigger and put my little Max in his 
	grave!

			JUDGE SKANKY
	Mrs. Shady! Do not POINT your finger 
	in my courtroom. It's discourteous, 
	impolite and disrespectful.

			MRS. SHADY
	Don't you tell me what to do with my 
	finger! It's been more places than 
	you've ever dreamed of!

			JUDGE SKANKY
		(bangs gavel)
	Sit down!

			MRS. SHADY
	I'll point my finger wherever I want!

Mrs. Shady goes berserk... leaping from the witness stand, 
pointing several different fingers at Judge Skanky.

The Bailiff attempts to restrain her, but she breaks free... 
scurrying around the courtroom, pointing fingers at everyone!

CHAOS prevails!

INT. COURTROOM - LATER

The Irritable Man from the train is on the stand... Max's 
huge cigar stuck in his ear! The hair around his ear is 
scorched.

			NED
	Did you encounter the victim... Max 
	Shady... on board the train?

			IRRITABLE MAN
	Yeah. And I told him... "this is the 
	NO SMOKING car! Would you please put 
	out your damn cigar!"

			NED
	And is that the cigar in your ear?

The Man strains to see the cigar out of the corner of his 
eye. Impatient, Ned finally holds up a small pocket mirror.

			IRRITABLE MAN
	I believe it is.

			NED
	I'd like the cigar and the head of 
	this witness entered into evidence.

The Bailiff picks up the Irritable Man and dumps him on the 
evidence table, where he is tagged by the Court Clerk.

			NED
	The defense calls... Lana Ravine!

INT. COURTROOM - LATER

Lana is on the stand. The Bailiff swears her in.

			BAILIFF
	Do you swear to tell the truth, the 
	whole truth and nothing but the truth 
	so help you God?

			LANA
		(looks to Judge)
	Do I have to answer that, Harlan?

			JUDGE SKANKY
	No, no dear. I'll vouch for her.

Ned approaches.

			NED
	Now, Mrs. Ravine... may I call you 
	Lana?

			LANA
	No. Call me Angel Tits.

			PROSECUTOR
	I object!

			JUDGE SKANKY
	Sustained. Counselor... you will 
	address Angel Tits as Mrs. Ravine.

			NED
		(after a beat)
	Mrs. Ravine... would you please tell 
	the court... what were you doing on 
	that train?

			LANA
	I saw Max Shady at the station... 
	saw him get on board. I knew he'd 
	made threats to kill you and mutilate 
	your reproductive organs...

Ned and EVERY MALE in the courtroom winces at this, doubling 
over in imagined agony. Lana pauses, then continues...

			LANA
	...so I got on the train too... so I 
	could warn you.

			NED
	Do you want to have children?

			LANA
	Someday. With the right man.

			NED
	But you couldn't have children if 
	my...
		(makes a gesture)
	...were...
		(another gesture)
	...and, uh...

			LANA
	It would be difficult.

			NED
	So you followed him, knowing you had 
	to protect me... your husband... 
	your best friend... the man you 
	love... the future father of your 
	children.

			LANA
	Something like that.

			NED
	And when you saw that maniac standing 
	in the vestibule, waiting to pulverize 
	my pee-pee... you pulled the gun and 
	fired and fired and FIRED!

			LANA
	And fired and fired and fired and 
	fired and fired and fired and fired...

She pauses to count off on her fingers, then...

			LANA
	...and fired and fired and fired.

			NED
	The defense rests, your Honor.

INT. COURTROOM - LATER

The COURTROOM ARTIST has been sketching intensely throughout 
the trial. We finally see... he's been sketching a BOWL OF 
FRUIT on the Court Recorder's desk. Ned picks up some fruit 
from the bowl and approaches the defense table.

			NED
	How can you convict a courageous 
	woman who risked everything to save 
	the life of her beloved husband? A 
	woman who acted boldly to stop a 
	demented maniac from doing THIS!...

Ned shoves the BANANA and two PLUMS into a demonstration 
blender on the defense table. He hits the puree button and 
the blender WHIRRS loudly!

			NED
		(shouts over)
	...pulverizing the private parts of 
	the man she loves!

All MALES in the courtroom react with pained expressions, 
cringing and doubling-over. Ned turns the blender off.

			NED
		(directly to Jury)
	Lana Ravine is a loving wife and the 
	potential mother of my potential 
	child. I challenge YOU to strike a 
	blow for motherhood and the American 
	justice system! Put the "con" back 
	in the Constitution. Put the "ju" 
	back in jurisprudence. Put the "can" 
	back in American. And put the "dom" 
	back in freedom. Find this woman 
	INNOCENT!... so we can all go to bed 
	happy tonight!

INT. PRESS ROOM - LATER

A REPORTER opens the door marked PRESS ROOM. Inside, a DOZEN 
REPORTERS press their pants on a dozen ironing boards.

			REPORTER
	The jury's back!

The Reporters scramble for the door, pulling their pants on!

INT. COURTROOM - LATER

The CAMERA FOLLOWS a folded piece of paper as the Jurors 
pass it along to the FOREMAN... who hands it to the Bailiff... 
who hands it to the Judge. He unfolds it, reads it... then 
winks flirtatiously at the FEMALE JUROR who wrote it. She 
blushes.

			JUDGE SKANKY
		(back to business)
	So... has the jury reached a verdict?

			JURY FOREMAN
		(stands up)
	Yes we have, your Honor.

			JUDGE SKANKY
	How do you find the defendant... on 
	the count of manslaughter?

			JURY FOREMAN
	Not guilty.

			JUDGE SKANKY
	On the count of murder in the first 
	degree?

			JURY FOREMAN
	Not guilty.

			JUDGE SKANKY
	On the Count of Monte Cristo?

			JURY FOREMAN
	Not guilty.

A BOISTEROUS CLAMOR in the court. The electronic signs FLASH 
"NOT GUILTY!"... "NOT GUILTY!"... "NOT GUILTY!"

			JUDGE SKANKY
	Good. Then on the count of three, 
	let's all get the hell out of here! 
	One... two...

The Jury and Spectators start to rise. The Judge hesitates, 
gavel poised, shooting them a warning look.

			JUDGE SKANKY
	Wait... for... it...

Everyone FREEZES halfway out of their seats... waiting.

			JUDGE SKANKY
	Two and a half... THREE!

He smacks his gavel. Everyone scatters for the doors, but 
Judge Skanky beats them out of the room.

Lana turns cool, dropping her courtroom facade. She plucks 
off her earrings, unbuttons the neck of her dress, reaches 
in and magically pulls out her bra, tossing it away.

			LANA
	Well, counselor, looks like you won 
	another case. Lucky for me.

TWO LEGAL AIDES sneak up behind Ned and dump a big plastic 
barrel of Gatorade cans over his head!

			BAILIFF (O.S.)
		(over P. A. system)
	Attention courtroom shoppers! All 
	trial evidence now on sale. Forty to 
	sixty percent off all exhibits! 
	Everything must go!

They turn to SEE: Spectators and Jurors browse through the 
clutter of junk in front of the Court Clerk on the evidence 
table. An IRRITABLE WOMAN claims the Irritable Man, grabbing 
the cigar from his ear and throwing it down.

			IRRITABLE WOMAN
	I told you, Bernard... smoking cigars 
	is bad for your hearing!

She pulls him away as Lana steps up, with a cigarette dangling 
from her lips. Lana picks up her gun and spins the cylinder. 
It's loaded. The battered Court Clerk limps over, smiling.

			COURT CLERK
	Mrs. Ravine! What can I do for ya?

			LANA
	How much for my gun?

Laura sees this... turns to Ned with a look of shock.

			LAURA
	I don't believe it! She just bought 
	her gun back! The gun she used to 
	kill a man!

Ned looks off toward Lana with admiration.

			NED
	Yeah... the same gun that saved my 
	life. I'm sure it has sentimental 
	value.

As Lana wades into the crowd of REPORTERS, some still without 
pants, the CAMERA MOVES TO Lola, who is watching Lana from 
the back of the courtroom.

Lola pulls a small cord hanging from the side of her hat... 
opening her veil like window drapes. She's not happy.

INT. FRANK'S GARAGE - DAY

Frank lays on a mechanic's "creeper", working under a car. 
Lana steps between his feet. He hears her and rolls out, his 
crotch sliding to a stop against her legs. He looks up, 
covered with black grease.

			FRANK
	So... you did it. Ya beat the rap.

			LANA
	No thanks to you.

He gets to his feet, cocky.

			FRANK
	Hey... I knew he'd spring ya.

She walks toward him, her voice cold, accusing. He backs up.

			LANA
	You didn't lift a finger, Frank. You 
	let me take all the heat.

			FRANK
	Heeeee-eeey... what could I do?

Lana pulls the gun from her purse, pointing it at him.

			LANA
	You were gonna let me rot in the 
	slammer... never say a thing.

			FRANK
	Look... you're out... free. Now we're 
	together. That's what counts. We can 
	try again! Forget triple indemnity. 
	We'll whack him and split three mil.

			LANA
	I'm not splitting anything, Frank.
		(cocks the gun)
	And you know too much.

			FRANK
		(arrogant)
	Come on, Lana. You're not gonna shoot 
	me.

He brashly turns his back to her, putting some tools away. 
She sees a huge electric powered SCREWDRIVER on the workbench 
next to her, smiling diabolically. She lowers the gun.

			LANA
	You're right.
		(then, seductive)
	Maybe I'll just screw you to death.

He laughs arrogantly... starts to unbutton his shirt.

			FRANK
	Now you're talkin' baby.

EXT. THE GARAGE WINDOW - DAY

We see Lana's SILHOUETTE on the window as she raises the big 
power screwdriver and turns it on. WHIRR-R-R-R-R-R-R-R-R-R!

The CAMERA WHIPS AROUND and PUSHES IN TO...

LOLA

watching the murder from her car. There is a... FLASH! Then 
another! And another! We are...

INT. THE GARAGE - LATER

A POLICE PHOTOGRAPHER takes FLASH pictures of the crime scene. 
The CORONER, COPS, FORENSIC MEN... all do their thing. Ned 
and Arch amble in, looking around. Arch is eating Nachos.

			FORENSIC MAN
	Watch your step, guys. There's a lot 
	of blood.

Throughout this scene, in the b.g., the milling COPS and 
INVESTIGATORS slip on all the blood, as if on slick ice, and 
fall out of frame, their arms and legs flailing helplessly!

One of the Coroner's INVESTIGATORS approaches Arch and Ned.

			INVESTIGATOR
	Looks like a suicide. We found a 
	note.

He holds up a rolled piece of paper with a pair of tweezers. 
Ned takes it, trying to unroll it.

			INVESTIGATOR
	It was stuck up his nose.

Ned hands it off to Arch, who casually unrolls it. The 
Investigator slips, arms waving, and falls out of frame.

			ARCH
		(reading it)
	"I can't take it anymore. I'm a 
	mediocre mechanic... and a lousy 
	lover."

			NED
	He's sure got that right.

Arch gives Ned a very strange look. Ned feels his stare.

			NED
	The "mechanic" part, I mean.

In the b.g., various COPS pair up to have their pictures 
taken by the Police Crime Scene Photographer... posing, 
grinning.

			NED
		(stares at the body)
	I don't know why, Arch, but I just 
	can't shake this crazy hunch it wasn't 
	suicide.

THE CAMERA MOVES

behind Ned on his line, revealing Frank... pinned to the 
wall by the power screwdriver stuck in his back! It's still 
running... vibrating with a GRINDING HUM.

Ned reaches out and turns the screwdriver OFF.

INT. NED'S HOUSE - DAY

Ned enters, pausing. He hears VOICES. He goes to the living 
room. Lana and Lola turn to see him in the doorway. He is 
shocked. Lana looks shaken. But Lola is cool... in control.

			LANA
	Oh... uh, Ned... This is Lola, um...

			NED
		(nervous, defensive)
	Um? She told you her name was Um? 
	And what other lies did she tell 
	you? I've never seen this woman in 
	my life! Never followed her home! 
	Never had sex with her in the 
	refrigerator! It's all a sick 
	fantasy... and I deny everything!

He turns to Lola.

			NED
	When will women like you learn, you 
	can't tear apart a perfectly good 
	marriage with your vicious lies... 
	Miss UMMMM!

			LOLA
	Actually... it's Smith. Lola Smith. 
	I sell vacuum cleaners, Mr. Ravine. 
	The big powerful kind that suck up 
	everything in sight. I was just 
	telling your wife, if she wants to 
	get rid of all her dirt, she has to 
	be willing to pay the price.

She turns to Lana with a cold and contemptuous glare.

			LOLA
	Let me know what you decide, Mrs. 
	Ravine. I'm sure we can work out a 
	convenient "payment" plan. A pleasure 
	meeting you... Ned.

Lola exits. As soon as the door closes, Lana whirls around 
in a fury!... SMASHING a lamp! She SHRIEKS furiously!

			LANA
	I... hate... SALESMEN!

He puts his arms around her, comforting.

			NED
	I know it's been a tough ordeal... 
	with the trial and everything. Tell 
	you what... let's take a trip.

			LANA
	A trip?

			NED
	Yeah. Just the two of us.

			LANA
		(darkly inspired)
	I like that. Just you and me... all 
	alone. I'll start packing.

			NED
	Great. Listen... I got something to 
	take care of. I'll be back in awhile.

He kisses her and exits. Lana turns to look up toward the 
landing, a vengefully insane smile clouding her face.

INT. LOLA'S HOUSE - DUSK

A demanding KNOCK at the door. Lola hesitates at the door.

			LOLA
	Who is it?

The door CRASHES OPEN! Ned is silhouetted in the doorway. He 
looks really pissed! Lola turns and runs. Ned sprints after 
her, leaping through the air... bringing her down with a 
tackle!

			NED
	I just want to talk.

			LOLA
	Why didn't you say so?

Her foot shoots out, smashing him right in the face... WHAM! 
She jumps up and scrambles away. Ned pursues her. She grabs 
a bottle of scotch from the counter, spins around.

			LOLA
	Would you like a drink?

She throws the bottle! He ducks and it shatters on the wall!

			NED
	No thanks. I'm driving.

She whirls on one foot, nailing him in the head with a FLYING 
SPIN KICK! He stumbles back, dazed. She grabs an ice pick.

			LOLA
	Then let's get to the point!

Lola charges! Ned rolls onto his back, jamming both feet 
into her stomach, heaving her up over him... thru the air! 
She SLAMS into the wall!... then slowly turns... still cool 
and collected. She raises a cigarette... lights it with the 
ice pick "lighter."

			LOLA
	So what's your problem, tough guy?

			NED
	Stay away from my life, my wife, my 
	home and my pets! I'm taking Lana on 
	a vacation and when I come back, I 
	don't ever want to see your face 
	again!

He shoves her against the wall... the cigarette flying away.

			LOLA
		(shocked)
	A VACATION! She doesn't deserve a 
	VACATION! She's a brat! A bad girl! 
	She always was and always will be!

He grabs her by the shoulders, shaking her.

			NED
	What are you talking about? You don't 
	know anything about Lana?

			LOLA
	I know EVERYTHING!

			NED
		(shakes her hard)
	How do you know her? Who is she to 
	you? TELL ME!

She clams up. He slaps her.

			NED
	Who is she!

			LOLA
	She's your wife!

			NED
		(slaps her again!)
	Who is she!?

			LOLA
	She's my sister!

			NED
		(slaps her again)
	Liar! Who is she?

			LOLA
	She's your wife!

He raises his hand to slap her hard.

			NED
	WHO IS SHE!

She SLAPS him!

			LOLA
	She's my sister!

She continues to slap him... back and forth... repeating her 
answers... "She's your wife"... "She's my sister!"... "Your 
wife!"... "My sister!"... "Wife!"... "Sister!"

He reaches a boiling point, raising two fingers, preparing 
to give her the Three Stooges "two-fingered eye poke." She 
blocks it with her hand and shoves him away. Then, she 
executes a perfect Three Stooges "wiggly-hand head slap", 
telling him...

			LOLA
	She's your wife... AND my sister!

Ned is stunned. MUSIC THUNDERS dramatically! Lana clicks the 
stereo off. The MUSIC STOPS.

			LOLA
	She was spoiled rotten! She stole 
	everything I ever had. Everything! 
	Including him.

			NED
	Him? Who, him?

			LOLA
	Dwayne. The boy's gym teacher. He 
	was older. So mature... so strong. 
	He smelled like dirty sweat socks 
	and old basketballs. And he was all 
	mine. For awhile.
		(turning bitter)
	But Lana wasn't satisfied with her 
	own things. She had to have mine 
	too. She took it all... my makeup, 
	my sweaters, my shoes, my underwear...

			NED
	You wore the same clothes?

			LOLA
	We were identical twins.

			NED
	What're you talking about? You two 
	don't look anything alike.

			LOLA
	Not anymore. One day I caught her 
	stealing my lavender eye shadow and 
	she smashed my face in with a shovel. 
	I had fifty-three operations. When 
	the doctors were finished with me... 
	I looked like THIS! I'm ugly. UGLY!

			NED
	You're beautiful.

			LOLA
	Don't lie to me.

			NED
	They did a terrific job!

			LOLA
	I look in the mirror. I can SEE!

			NED
	But... you're gorgeous!

			LOLA
	Tell that to Dwayne. When he saw my 
	face, he left me for HER... because 
	she looked more like me than I did! 
	First she stole my looks... then she 
	stole the only man who ever loved 
	me!

She comes toward him... feeling in control once more.

			LOLA
	But I found a way to get even. The 
	best revenge possible. Destroy her 
	marriage!

			NED
	That's why you did all this? Seduced 
	me... harrassed me... the tape... 
	the flowers... the phone calls...

			LOLA
	You been hangin' out with Dick Tracy, 
	haven't ya?

			NED
	It won't work. Lana loves me.

			LOLA
	It doesn't matter. I'm blackmailing 
	her for everything she's worth. She 
	murdered that greasy auto mechanic. 
	I saw her do it.

			NED
		(stunned)
	Lana killed Frank Kelbo?

			LOLA
		(also stunned)
	Kelbo! His name was Kelbo?

			NED
	Yeah. Why? Did he burn you on car 
	repairs too?

			LOLA
	Dwayne's name was Kelbo. He had a 
	son. Frankie Kelbo.

INT. NED'S CAR - NIGHT

Ned wanders to his car, climbs in, sits there... stunned.

			NED (V.O.)
	The pieces of the puzzle were falling 
	into place and I didn't like the 
	picture they were making. If Lana 
	really killed Frank Kelbo, then I 
	had misjudged her by a mile. Sure... 
	he was a lousy mechanic. But murder?

Ned rubs his temples, shuts his eyes.

			NED (V.O.)
	It was all starting to give me a 
	headache bigger than the national 
	deficit.

INT. LOLA'S HOUSE - NIGHT

"In-A-Gadda-Da-Vida" plays on the stereo. Lola sits on the 
floor by an end table, eyes dazed, staring blankly. A lamp 
with a "clapper" switch sits on the table.

As the CAMERA MOVES IN SLOWLY to her, she absently "claps" 
the light off... then on... then off... then on... then off...

INT. NED'S HOUSE - NIGHT

CLOSE ON female hands using a keyhole saw to cut through a 
railing on the second floor landing above the foyer.

Outside... the SOUND of a car... headlights! The sawing stops.

EXT. NED'S HOUSE - NIGHT

Ned pulls up. The house is dark and ominous. So is the MUSIC.

INT. NED'S HOUSE - NIGHT

The front door is open a crack. He cautiously pushes it and 
the door CR-E-A-K-S open very slowly. The door STOPS, but 
the LOUD CREAKING continues. Ned touches it lightly with the 
tip of his finger. The CREAKING STOPS.

			NED
	Lana?

Ned moves up the stairs. The CAMERA BOOMS UP with him, HOLDING 
ON an ECU of the partially severed railing.

INT. BATHROOM - NIGHT

Ned enters. Hot water gushes from the faucet into a clawfoot 
bathtub. He turns the water off, looking around, puzzled.

Loosens his tie, rubs his head. A splitting headache. Opens 
the medicine cabinet and... SCREECH! YEOW! CRASH! A CAT leaps 
out!... darts away. There's a NOISE from downstairs.

INT. THE KITCHEN - MOMENTS LATER

Someone is POUNDING on the door. Ned enters and opens it. 
It's Laura.

			LAURA
	Ned! I'm glad you're here. I have so 
	much to tell you.

			NED
	Come on in. I'll make some tea. Grab 
	a chair.

			LAURA
	Thanks... I brought my own.

She drags a chair in behind her, sits at the kitchen table. 
Ned puts a kettle on the burner, turns it on. He starts 
searching through the cupboard for teabags.

			NED
	So... what have you got?

			LAURA
	A lottery ticket and a laundry 
	receipt.
		(lays them on table)
	I found them in the pocket of that 
	suit you wore the night you were 
	working under cover with a client.

Ned freezes, staring out the window, unable to face her.

			LAURA
	You remember that night, don't ya 
	Ned? Then it hit me. Lottery starts 
	with L-O. Laundry starts with L-A. L-
	O... L-A. Lola.

Ned turns to her when he hears Lola's name... looking baffled 
by this convoluted piece of logic.

			LAURA
		(shrugs it off)
	Don't sweat it. It's the way a woman's 
	mind works.

He turns back to the cupboard, picking up a container.

			NED
	How about Ovaltine?

			LAURA
	Fine. Then I remembered you told me 
	some guy named Frank had been working 
	on your wife's car for two months. 
	You with me so far?

			NED
	I'm way ahead of you.

He brings the Ovaltine container to the table.

			LAURA
	Well back it up. You probably took a 
	wrong turn. Remember your insurance 
	policy... the one we couldn't find? 
	I started thinking, who else had 
	access to it beside you and me? The 
	answer came up... Lana. And since 
	she's a woman, it's probably hidden 
	right here.

A huge ceramic cookie jar sits on the table in front of them. 
Laura SMASHES it with her fist, breaking it open! Cookies 
spill out... and the insurance policy.

			NED
	So that's where she hid the Oreos.

He sits down... starts eating Oreos... twisting them apart.

			LAURA
	Ned, Lana wasn't trying to save your 
	life when she shot Max Shady. She 
	and Frank were plotting to kill you 
	and collect on your insurance policy. 
	But she shot the wrong guy.

			NED
	That's the craziest thing I ever 
	heard.

			LAURA
		(she presses on)
	Don't you see... Frank was going to 
	let her take the fall. So she murdered 
	him and tried to make it look like 
	suicide.
		(beat)
	That's when I realized there was a 
	connection between Lola and Lana...

			NED
	Yeah... they're sisters. Twin sisters.

			LAURA
	Well, hang on to your jock strap, 
	Ned. There's more.

She unrolls a complex genealogical chart... walks him thru 
it.

			LAURA
	Not only is Frank's father Dwayne 
	Kelbo, notoriously amorous gym teacher 
	and Lola Cain's former lover... 
	Frank's mother is Helen Shady. Max 
	and Frank are half-brothers who never 
	met.

Laura pauses dramatically, then announces.

			LAURA
	Your lovely wife, Lana, murdered 
	both of Helen Shady's sons.

			NED
	This is so unbelievable.

			LAURA
	And you haven't even heard my story.

INT. HOUSE - UPSTAIRS LANDING - NIGHT

The keyhole saw cuts through the railing. The CAMERA REVEALS 
Lana, eyes filled with Machiavellian rage.

She enters the bathroom, lays the saw blade down. Suddenly... 
a PAIR OF HANDS plunge into frame, grabbing her by the throat!

We GO WITH HER as she is pushed back into the tub, the hands 
forcing her head under water. Lana grabs a diving mask, clamps 
it over her face. One of the attacking hands rips it away! 
Lana grabs a snorkel, sticking it in her mouth. The hand 
pulls it from her, tossing it aside.

The hand shoves a little RUBBER DUCKIE into Lana's mouth! 
Lana struggles, finally going limp. Her open eyes stare up 
from beneath the water. The last few bubbles rise to the 
surface.

INT. KITCHEN - SAME TIME

			LAURA
	He turned into a monster. And that's 
	when I left him. I just couldn't...

The tea kettle WHISTLES! Laura pulls it off the burner. The 
whistling subsides... replaced by the distant SOUND of water 
running upstairs. Ned cocks his head, listening.

			NED
	That damn faucet keeps turning on 
	all by itself. I'll go check it.

			LAURA
	Okay. I'll make the Ovaltine.

Ned exits. Laura opens the Ovaltine container. It's empty. A 
DARK SHADOW moves past the window behind Laura. Suspense 
MUSIC. Laura opens the cupboard. PIGEONS explode out, wings 
beating furiously! She catches her breath, looks in the 
cupboard. The cans and boxes are covered with pigeon shit. 
She shoves them aside, looking for the Ovaltine.

INT. FOYER - SAME TIME

Ned looks up toward the light from the bathroom. Water seeps 
over the edge of the landing and down the steps. As he moves 
up the steps, the SOUND of MUSIC... the familiar strains of 
"In-A-Gadda-Da-Vida"... grows louder and LOUDER.

INT. BATHROOM - SAME TIME

It's filled with steam. He waves the steam away... STARTLED 
to see Lana's lifeless body beneath the water, the rubber 
duckie jammed into her mouth. The tub overflows on the floor.

He turns the faucet off. The water stops... and so does the 
MUSIC. Puzzled, he turns the faucet on. The MUSIC STARTS. 
Turns it off. The MUSIC STOPS.

INT. KITCHEN - SAME TIME

As Laura turns away to enter the pantry... her Husband's 
twisted face suddenly appears in the kitchen window!

INT. BEDROOM - SAME TIME

Ned enters. The MUSIC is coming from the closet. Ned yanks 
the door open! A flock of PIGEONS bursts out!... revealing a 
GUEST MUSICIAN playing an instrument.

			GUEST MUSICIAN
	I'm sittin' in for Dizzy. He had a 
	gig tonight.

Ned shuts the door, eyes shifting. Lola must be near.

INT. PANTRY OFF KITCHEN - SAME TIME

Laura searches the large walk-in pantry for tea bags. She 
hears a LOUD CRASH of BREAKING GLASS in the kitchen... stops 
and listens... then casually shrugs it off.

INT. KITCHEN - SAME TIME

Laura's Husband stands in the kitchen. The back door is 
open... the window shattered. He SEES... the kitchen towels 
hanging sloppily on the rack! The disorganized clutter of 
cans and boxes in the cupboard! WE PUSH IN to his wildly 
insane eyes!

INT. UPSTAIRS LANDING - SAME TIME

As Ned enters the upstairs landing, we hear VOICES in his 
mind.

			NED
		(ECHOING V.O.)
	Women are an open book. You can always 
	tell the rotten apples from the 
	peaches. I'd stake my career on it... 
	stake my career on it... stake my 
	career on it...

The repetitive ECHO gets to him. He smacks his head with the 
palm of his hand. The skipping stops... followed by...

			NED
		(ECHOING V.O.)
	...If anyone ever proves me wrong, 
	I'll throw away my badge.

IN THE DARKNESS

A woman's HAND unrolls a leather kit... the "U-Pick an Ice 
Pick Porta-Pik-Pak!"... with seven ice picks in separate 
slots, each labeled with a day of the week.

The hand selects "Wednesday's" ice pick, pulls it out. Then... 
BONG... BONG... BONG... BONG...!

CANTED ANGLE ON - A GRANDFATHER CLOCK

It CHIMES loudly. It's twelve midnight!

THE HAND

returns the ice pick to its slot, selects the one for 
Thursday.

INT. KITCHEN - SAME TIME

Laura comes out of the pantry. She stops... gasps! Everything 
in the cupboard is neatly stacked! All the towels are 
straight!

She whirls around... coming face to face with her Husband! 
He smiles demonically, holding up the Ninja Turtle float 
ring.

			LAURA'S HUSBAND
	Forget something, sweetheart?

INT. UPSTAIRS LANDING - SAME TIME

Ned nears the bathroom door and suddenly... A PIERCING SCREAM! 
Lola charges, an ice pick raised over her head! She knocks 
him backward, into the bathroom, slashing at him. But he 
deflects the attack, grabbing at her arms.

INT. KITCHEN - SAME TIME

Laura backs away from her Husband. He holds her wedding ring.

			LAURA'S HUSBAND
	You forgot to flush, darling.

INT. UPSTAIRS LANDING - SAME TIME

As Ned and Lola continue their violent struggle... Lola grabs 
toiletries to aid in her attack. She squirts Ned with SHAVING 
CREAM... squeezes TOOTHPASTE in his hair... and throws BATH 
POWDER in his face!

Ned is blinded. Gaining the advantage, Lola shoves him back, 
slamming his head into the wall. He's dazed, helpless.

Lola raises the ice pick, moving forward to strike! But Ned 
grabs a HAIR BLOWER and swings it around, pointing it at her 
like a gun! She freezes... then smiles contemptuously.

			LOLA
	What're you gonna do, Ned? Blow me 
	away?

She LAUGHS arrogantly. Ned clicks on the hair blower to HIGH, 
a blast of HOT AIR hitting Lola's face, puffing her cheeks 
out, pushing her back, hair flying wildly!

Her backside hits the railing where Lana has cut it... the 
wood splintering!

Lola tumbles over backward, SCREAMING! She hangs suspended 
in mid-air for a moment, like a cartoon character, arms 
flailing. Then... WHOOM!... she FALLS to the marble floor 
below, hitting with a LOUD THUD!

INT. THE KITCHEN - SAME TIME

Laura's Husband hears Lola fall, turning. Laura grabs the 
iron skillet and CLOBBERS him with it! BONG! He goes down.

			LAURA
	I never forget anything... honey.

INT. UPSTAIRS LANDING - SAME TIME

Ned stares at the hair blower in his hand. Filled with disgust 
and revulsion, he throws the "weapon" down.

INT. KITCHEN - SAME TIME

Laura pulls TWO REVOLVERS from her purse... spinning them 
like John Wayne... expertly tossing one over her back, 
catching it in front! She heads for the foyer.

INT. FOYER - A MOMENT LATER - ON LOLA'S BODY

Laura pauses, looks down at Lola's body... notices something. 
She pushes Lola's skirt a bit higher with the toe of her 
shoe.

			LAURA
		(outraged)
	Those are MY panties!

She looks up... sees a light emanating from the bathroom.

ON THE LANDING

Laura moves through the shadows... stops outside the bathroom, 
pressing her back against the wall, guns up and ready.

She swivels into the doorway... taking a shooter's stance... 
guns pointed! She sees... LANA... submerged in the tub, face 
up, the rubber duckie in her mouth.

Laura steps back and turns... right into a THING covered in 
white! Startled, she SHRIEKS! Ned drops the white towel he's 
using to wipe off all of the shaving cream and toothpaste. 
Relieved to see it's Ned, she throws her arms around him!

			LAURA
	Oh Ned!

			NED
	You were right... there's a million 
	things I don't know about women. 
	Maybe you can teach me a few hundred.

He pulls out his police badge, looks at it.

			NED
	Hell... I had too many careers anyway.

He tosses it away, over the railing.

INT. FOYER - ECU LOLA - SAME TIME

The badge drops from above, landing on the floor right in 
front of Lola's lifeless face. A beat. Her eyes pop open!

INT. BATHROOM - ECU ON BATH WATER - SAME TIME

Suddenly, the rubber duckie pops to the surface.

ON THE LANDING

Laura hugs Ned again, arms locked around his neck, still 
gripping a gun in each hand.

			LAURA
	Oh Ned, I love you. I always loved 
	you!

INT. FOYER

Lola sits bolt upright, bloody but still bouncy.

INT. BATHROOM

Lana suddenly SITS UP in the tub, inhaling a huge GASP of 
air, her eyes wild!

INT. KITCHEN - NIGHT

Laura's Husband's eyes POP OPEN! He SITS UP suddenly... 
smashing his head into the sharp corner of the kitchen table! 
He topples back slowly... really dead! Finally.

INT. THE STAIRCASE

Lola's feet move steadily up each stair... her bloody hand 
grasping the ice pick.

INT. BATHROOM FLOOR - LOW ANGLE

Lana's feet step out of the tub, water dripping all around. 
She picks up the pointed saw from the floor.

ON THE LANDING

Ned and Laura still embrace, her forearms crisscrossed behind 
his neck. It's been a long embrace.

Suddenly, Lana and Lola both appear, SCREAMING like banshees!

Lana charges from the bathroom, grasping the sharp saw blade! 
Lola races at them from the stairway... with the ice pick!

Without missing a beat, Laura raises the barrels of both 
guns and FIRES at them simultaneously... right next to Ned's 
ears.

The impact of one bullet knocks Lana all the way back through 
the bathroom, CRASHING spectacularly out the window! The 
other bullet sends Lola flipping down the staircase!

Ned looks stunned, his eyes crossed... the thundering gunshots 
still ringing in his ears. Laura proudly blows the gunsmoke 
away from the end of each barrel.

			LAURA
	Got 'em!

			NED
		(deafened)
	WHAT?

			LAURA
	I said... I GOT 'EM!

			NED
	HUH?!!!

			LAURA
		(yells)
	THEY'RE DEAD! GONE! KA-PUT!

He strains to make out what she's saying, ears still ringing.

			NED
		(yells back)
	SURE I'LL MARRY YOU! NEXT TUESDAY 
	WOULD BE PERFECT!

A beat. Laura opens her mouth to correct him, then decides 
against it. She smiles... speaking softly, almost shyly.

			LAURA
	Okay. But I want to have kids.

He hears THIS... smiles at her.

			NED
	Great.

They embrace.

EXT. NED'S HOUSE - WIDE SHOT - NEAR DAWN

We MOVE IN SLOWLY toward the house.

			NED (V.O.)
	So... maybe I was wrong. Maybe women 
	really are like a big jigsaw puzzle... 
	with pieces that never seem to fit 
	where you want 'em to.

INT. NED'S HOUSE - THE BEDROOM - SAME TIME

Ned and Laura are in bed, wrapped in each other's arms.

			NED (V.O.)
	All I know is, there are three things 
	that men can't possibly ever do...

NEW ANGLE - NED AND LAURA

Revealing that it's NOT "voice over narration." Ned is 
actually rattling on aloud again.

			NED
	...understand women... give birth... 
	and program a VCR. And giving birth 
	is the easy one.

			LAURA
	Ned...

			NED
	Yeah, Laura?

			LAURA
	Knock off the chatter, will ya?

He smiles at her. They kiss. Romantic SAXAPHONE MUSIC begins 
to play... only this time, it's "Laura's Theme."

The CAMERA PULLS BACK SLOWLY... revealing Dizzy laying on 
the bed beside them... playing the sax.

After a beat, Laura turns to Dizzy.

			LAURA
	We won't need you anymore.

Ned casually slips him a twenty dollar bill. Dizzy slips off 
the bed and out the door. Laura turns to Ned.

			LAURA
	We can make our own music.

Her hand reaches slowly over the edge of the bed, toward the 
floor. Suddenly... she comes up with a CONCERTINA, a small 
accordian... and begins to play it!

Ned lays there listening for a few moments, a stunned look 
frozen on his face. Then... he reaches under the pillow and 
pulls out a HARMONICA and joins in.

The CAMERA BOOMS UP to a HIGH ANGLE SHOT... as they play 
MEDLEY of all the MUSIC heard in the film.

FADE TO BLACK

ROLL END CREDITS

After the final credit, WE HEAR:

			LAURA (V.O.)
	Ned, do you know... I want you to 
	make love to me all night long?

			NED (V.O.)
	No. But if you hum a few bars... 
	I'll fake it.

					THE END
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